EdenFantasys Adult Products Reviewer: mybreeze

can someone please help me figure this out a little bit better so i dont look like such an idiot?

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well first of all my grammar skills arent that great. second i need to write a few reviews to get used to how it works. third i cant find anything I'm looking for ive signed up as a student mentor and cant figure that out. I'm trying to request an upgrade to advanced level so i can recieve products and write reviews hopefully better reviews. I'm just confused i suppose I've spent hours trying to figure everything out and i just feel stupid, but I'm sure ill get there.

If you didn't hear anything from the first mentor you applied for, apply again.

As far as grammar, I don't know what I can advise except practice. There are some very simple improvements you could make, though---start by always capitalizing the first letter of your sentences, and always capitalize "I". When you don't capitalize, it looks like you're not putting any effort in---and if you put in the effort to make your grammar as correct as you know how to, then people are more likely to overlook the tougher grammar questions.

Here's the complete list of mentors: link
Read through and find one who says they specialize in grammar and writing style. A lot on the first few pages aren't available, so check some of the beginning and middle pages too.

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Thank you for all of your help, it is greatly appreciated! Also, I have attempted to enroll in 2 different mentor program's and got denied from both of them. It was rather disappointing because I wasn't sure why I had gotten denied?

Mybreeze, sometimes mentors deny new students simply because they're busy at the moment. Keep trying to enroll in other mentors classes though, or even post in the forum that you are looking for a mentor. Someone will accept you into their class -- though I know how frustrating getting denied can be.

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