#EdenLit Game - my 8 sentences

bog bog
Hello, everyone!

I am new to EF as of a month or so ago. I'm still getting the hang of everything! I'm not sure how the #EdenLit posts work or if I did it right, so I'll try this way! Let me know what the protocol is for posting work - as a reply to the topic/OP, or like this, as a new message!

Anyway, I guess this is my first real post here!

I love to write and love these prompts! I am going to try writing some sultry "ultra-short" or mini-fiction for some of these prompts. Here was my first shot, which is in response to 8 sentences make it fun. It is about a person who works at a sex toy shop.


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I don't have 8 reviews yet, so I'll use my most recent.

I played a 75-words-or-less game here! It's 75 words exactly.


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"If you prefer glass or metal anal toys, steer clear of this ultra-bendy silicone," she warned the middle-aged man.
"ANAL?" he spat.
He flung words like toys tossed in a temper tantrum. His face screwed up into a toddler's mess. He crossed his arms.
"ANAL," he repeated, "is NOT the word I would use."
The salesgirl knitted booties with her eyebrows at the babyman's tantrum. She took a deep breath and began singing a lullaby.
01/23/2013
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Originally posted by bog
Hello, everyone!

I am new to EF as of a month or so ago. I'm still getting the hang of everything! I'm not sure how the #EdenLit posts work or if I did it right, so I'll try this way! Let me know what the protocol is for posting ... More
WOW! Very evocative descriptions. I'd love to read something longer from you!
02/09/2013
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