Eden Lit- July 11, 2011 at 7pm: Writers Club

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Eden Lit- July 11, 2011 at 7pm: Writers Club

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Contributor: Emma (Girl With Fire) Emma (Girl With Fire)
Hi guys!
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
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Originally posted by Wondermom
OMG I loved them! I am hooked womans series, I want to know what comes next right now lol

I couldn't read Ivy Wildes submission about rape, but the embarrassing moments are great! And karen that guy was a dick! I would have jumped into bed ... more
Of Rape and Reality was a hard one for me but I felt compelled to read. Even in the excerpt I felt the emotion.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
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Originally posted by Emma (Girl With Fire)
Hi guys!
Hello
07/11/2011
Contributor: Wondermom Wondermom
I have to admit my heart jumped into my throat at the end of womans part 3, maybe even a little tear started!
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Wondermom
OMG I loved them! I am hooked womans series, I want to know what comes next right now lol

I couldn't read Ivy Wildes submission about rape, but the embarrassing moments are great! And karen that guy was a dick! I would have jumped into bed ... more
Ivy's story was very painful to read and it hurt to see something so awful happen as a first experience with alcohol. You could feel her confusion and terror and it was rough but honest. What she's feeling and felt are perfectly normal and follow the rape trauma syndrome. I just ended up wanting to hug her and love her a little, ya know?
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
Like A Pause before Counterattack had me missing the water and what it brings to me.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Wondermom
OMG I loved them! I am hooked womans series, I want to know what comes next right now lol

I couldn't read Ivy Wildes submission about rape, but the embarrassing moments are great! And karen that guy was a dick! I would have jumped into bed ... more
OMG Woman CHina's work is SO amazing isn't it? Just makes you want to cozy up to her brain and wander around inside!
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Ivy's story was very painful to read and it hurt to see something so awful happen as a first experience with alcohol. You could feel her confusion and terror and it was rough but honest. What she's feeling and felt are perfectly normal and ... more
I so understand...
07/11/2011
Contributor: Wondermom Wondermom
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Ivy's story was very painful to read and it hurt to see something so awful happen as a first experience with alcohol. You could feel her confusion and terror and it was rough but honest. What she's feeling and felt are perfectly normal and ... more
yeah, I just knew from the excerpt that it would be to triggering for myself to read more, I wish I was at that point where I could have read it all.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
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Originally posted by Wondermom
yeah, I just knew from the excerpt that it would be to triggering for myself to read more, I wish I was at that point where I could have read it all.
It brought up alot of memories but I couldn't stop reading. It was very emotional and helped on the inside just simply because it was written and shared
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Spoken Pandora
Thank you so much I love to here that. I write from my thoughts and they are filled with so much but poetry helps me free my mind. I try not to get too attached but I really do to each piece. Ask anything you want.
OK in Untitled Poetry....what is stalking you? It sounds intriguing and I mioght possibly want some!!??!!
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
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Originally posted by Emma (Girl With Fire)
Hi guys!
Hey there!
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Spoken Pandora
Like A Pause before Counterattack had me missing the water and what it brings to me.
OMG I know I was all like this is EXACTLY what Summer is when you work your ass off all Winter!
07/11/2011
Contributor: Wondermom Wondermom
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Originally posted by Spoken Pandora
It brought up alot of memories but I couldn't stop reading. It was very emotional and helped on the inside just simply because it was written and shared
I commend her for sharing such an emotional story so openly, I know from experience that sharing is not easy, I can't even do it with a therapist let alone online to strangers.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Wondermom
yeah, I just knew from the excerpt that it would be to triggering for myself to read more, I wish I was at that point where I could have read it all.
That day will come just be gentle with yourself and love where you are! You survived and you are amoung people who know where you are and will love you to where ever you want to be.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
OK in Untitled Poetry....what is stalking you? It sounds intriguing and I mioght possibly want some!!??!!
The darkness of my Domme. In the beginning it was scary but I couldn't walk away, it was always there even when she wasn't. But it was, her darkness, a mirror image of my thoughts. Its definitely what she she represents that haunts me if that makes sense.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Wondermom
I commend her for sharing such an emotional story so openly, I know from experience that sharing is not easy, I can't even do it with a therapist let alone online to strangers.
Sometimes it can be easier to share anonymously something that traumatic...sometimes not. She is an amazing woman truth be told and so very courageous.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
OMG I know I was all like this is EXACTLY what Summer is when you work your ass off all Winter!
I soo understand that...lol I wanted to pack up and hit the road
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Spoken Pandora
The darkness of my Domme. In the beginning it was scary but I couldn't walk away, it was always there even when she wasn't. But it was, her darkness, a mirror image of my thoughts. Its definitely what she she represents that haunts me if that ... more
Ahhhhhh that makes perfect sense and I am rereading it with that explanation...it is much more powerful.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Wondermom Wondermom
Antipova's story about her pants ripping when dancing made me giggle, I love the control elements of her partner, not being allowed to choose her own clothes, no looking around. Very hot.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
Quote:
Originally posted by Wondermom
I commend her for sharing such an emotional story so openly, I know from experience that sharing is not easy, I can't even do it with a therapist let alone online to strangers.
It still haunts me but the after effects lurk in my writing. I don't mine them showing themselves there because I feel like I am in control of them. It gives me power back bits and bits at a time.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Ahhhhhh that makes perfect sense and I am rereading it with that explanation...it is much more powerful.
Oh and being a Domme myself I know why it drew me in Yes I do want some of that LOL
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Ahhhhhh that makes perfect sense and I am rereading it with that explanation...it is much more powerful.
Well thank you. I am glad you enjoy it. I had to reread it a bit myself and I instantly remember when I wrote it and my thoughts at the time.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
I'm still here, just fascinated and taking in everything.

I think I'll be spending a good portion of my evening reading stories!
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Wondermom
Antipova's story about her pants ripping when dancing made me giggle, I love the control elements of her partner, not being allowed to choose her own clothes, no looking around. Very hot.
mmmmmmmm that one was Sigel's favorite, he loves the power of doing something outrageous and daring like dressing me in totally too tight clothing and just daring the seams to rip...
07/11/2011
Contributor: Wondermom Wondermom
Quote:
Originally posted by Spoken Pandora
It still haunts me but the after effects lurk in my writing. I don't mine them showing themselves there because I feel like I am in control of them. It gives me power back bits and bits at a time.
I used to write very dark poetry to deal with my feelings but I haven't written anything in a long long time.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
(EF Review Program Mentor)
Quote:
Originally posted by Ansley
I'm still here, just fascinated and taking in everything.

I think I'll be spending a good portion of my evening reading stories!
Lucky you! Don't we have some amazingly talented writers?
07/11/2011
Contributor: BexvanKoot BexvanKoot
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Just glad to have you here Bex. Are you house sitting in a lovely area now?
Three months in to a six month stay in the Oaxaca Valley of Mexico. Time is flying by here!
07/11/2011
Contributor: Spoken Pandora Spoken Pandora
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Oh and being a Domme myself I know why it drew me in Yes I do want some of that LOL
LOL...I notice that there is a lot of "us" here. LOL It makes it easier for me to share and be myself with writing here because I feel it can be more appreciated.
07/11/2011
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Lucky you! Don't we have some amazingly talented writers?
Indeed!! I know I shouldn't be intimated but damn ladies! This is powerful stuff.
07/11/2011