#EdenLit - (01.2012) Open Topic - Love at Snow Lake (part 1)

PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
I would like to submit a fantasy to the EdenLit Club. I enjoy reading erotic books and have written two book reviews with the help of my former mentor, ‘AliceintheHole’. In my opinion, reading erotica short-stories can be more captivating and definitely better than viewing porn in so many ways. I was also inspired to write a fantasy at the end of each book review to add my personal touch. While most of these stories are written by women for women, I believe men could also find inspiration by reading these short-stories with their partner. The possibilities in reading these racy stories could just be the catalyst in fulfilling their utmost erotic fantasy.

Since I do not have a personal ‘blog’ site, I have had to split this story into two parts. I ask for your indulgence and hope you will take the time to enjoy reading them both together.

The fantasy that follows is largely a true story. The airplane is real, the landmarks are real, and the lake is real. The only thing left to this fantasy is whether the cabin or the woman is real in my story. I will leave that to your own imagination. May all your fantasies...come true!



LOVE AT SNOW LAKE

by PassionateLover2

We’re five miles out from our destination to Snow Lake in the Alpine area of the rugged Cascades Mountains. I contacted Chinook Center and canceled my flight following and was directed to squawk 1-2-0-0 after receiving my final barometric reading. I made final adjustments to the plane’s manifold pressure and changed radio frequencies before reaching our planned rendezvous.

It turned out to be a beautiful sunny day with light winds out of the northwest as we enjoyed the one hour flight from Seattle. This was your very first ride in my Cessna 172. During the flight, you became more relaxed as we talked and took pleasure in the views from 5,500 feet. Without a single cough, the powerful Avco Lycoming engine hummed deeply, as we absorbed the landscape below. Earlier in the day, you kept teasing and asking me where we were headed and what you should pack. But now, the mystery was over and you became more aroused to the weekend ahead.

Flying through the mountains is a thrilling experience because everything looks so virgin and captures the beauty of the raw terrain below.

I now focused my attention on the approach for landing as I reduced power and added ten degrees of flaps. As we descended thru the scattered clouds and breached Melakwa Pass, your eyes widened as you glanced in the distance at the beautiful deep-blue lake ahead. I sensed your heart racing with excitement as you said, “Hey flyboy, where are we going to land?” Without a response, I descended lower and flew over the lake and made a left bank turn to set up for my landing. Like tall guardians protecting the secrets ahead, I stayed clear of the tall twin-peaks of Bryant Mountain on the left and Snoqualmie Mountain to my right.

I was on a mission to keep you safe; to enjoy the weekend out here in the wide open wilderness and to make deep passionate love to you.

Adding full flaps and reducing all power, I skimmed over the tops of the tall fir trees at the edge of the lake and gently glided down over the water. As the floats kissed the smooth surface, spray flew outward in all directions behind us. Ahead was our destination. Nestled back from the shore was the small cabin awaiting our arrival. I cut the engine and slowly, ever so slowly, steered the plane so the front floats kissed the sandy shore coming to a stop.

Entering the cabin you looked around and found everything so warm and cozy. I headed to the kitchen to open a window while you explored the bedroom with our suitcases in tow. There, on the large queen-size bed, was a single long-stem red rose beckoning you to come close. You knew my intentions now as a warm throbbing wave surged between your thighs. You came out to meet me in the center of the main room wrapping your arms around my neck, and we embraced and kissed deeply. “I love this cabin. It even has a fireplace,” you said, as you stepped back looking intensely into my eyes. “I love you,” you added with a tearful glee.

The sun was setting low in the west and I started a warm fire in the cabin. It was getting darker outside and the clear night was beginning to fill with stars shining bright, as a full moon was rising over the trees. Inside, on a small table was a bottle of wine with two crystal glasses next to that long-stem rose. The mood was right – everything was right – it would be a night to remember.

It was unusually quiet in the room, except for the crackling fire. Its glow radiated a soft hue against the large soft bear rug lying in front. My eyes lingered mindlessly as I stared into the flickering light. A few moments later, I heard a door open and I turned to see you standing at the threshold of the bedroom. I froze, mesmerized, to see you wearing only a black-laced choker around your neck, as your hair cascaded off your naked shoulders. You were so stunning. The twin pinpoint-peaks of your exposed breasts swelled with delight and your mound rose in desire.

You slowly approached me with your hazel-brown eyes locked to mine. Your smiling parted-red lips glimmered with wetness from the glow of the fire as you drew near. You put your arms around my neck once more and said softly, “This is the most beautiful day of my life. Being here with you, in such a wilderness place, makes me feel so warm and safe with you!”

“There is nothing out here more beautiful and captivating, except for you my love,” I quietly replied in return. This wasn’t just foreplay, wasn’t just sex, or giving in to a fantasy; it was my desire to worship you, for your heart, pure and simple.



(please continue to part 2)


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aliceinthehole aliceinthehole
Quote:
Originally posted by PassionateLover2
I would like to submit a fantasy to the EdenLit Club. I enjoy reading erotic books and have written two book reviews with the help of my former mentor, ‘AliceintheHole’. In my opinion, reading erotica short-stories can be more captivating and ... More
LOVE AT SNOW LAKE – by PassionateLover2


(continued from part 1)





“There is nothing out here more beautiful and captivating, except for you my love,” I quietly replied in return. This wasn’t just foreplay, wasn’t just sex, or giving in to a fantasy; it was my desire to worship you, for your heart, pure and simple.

We kissed in a long embrace as the heat radiated from the roaring fire. Your soft warm body added to my arousal which I could not deny. Our tongues danced and fluttered with sexual excitement as our juices mingled together. I loved the taste of your yielding wet lips fused with mine. Catching our breaths, I handed you a glass of wine and we drank a long slow sip of the sweet nectar. But slowly, without further word you knelt before me pulling down my pants. You grabbed my butt and drew me in close. You placed into your mouth the head of my cock and swirled your tongue all around as I grew in size. I closed my eyes as you took more of my erect shaft deeper and deeper towards the back of your throat. I moaned for a moment as your soft wet mouth took me in.

As I stood there, helplessly, I reached down with my hands to cup and caress your tender breasts and gave then a soft squeeze. All your senses are filled with me; the way I taste, the way I smell, and the way I feel made your heart beat faster. What seemed like an eternity, you finally pulled away and I drew you up close to me in a gentle embrace. With a low, but soft voice you sensually said, “There, that is the way I like to say, thank you!”

But before you could say more, I lifted you into my arms and placed you down on the warm bear rug waiting in front of the fireplace. You looked so beautiful, naked, and helpless and yearning for me. I knelt down and slowly spread you legs wide. I could smell your sweet aroma so wanting of my caress. And then again you begged with a soft whisper, “I want you! I want you to fuck me! Make love to me tonight!”

As I leaned forward to kiss you on your lips once more, my long, hard, cock entered your wet, throbbing, pussy taking me inch by inch. Your body responded instantly as a gush of heat raced to your groin. I slid deeper into you and you convulsed and moaned a sharp cry, “Oh baby. That feels so good.” I began to thrust deeper and harder in rhythmic motion just like the power of a Lycoming engine. I could feel you arch under the intense pounding like hot pistons moving up and down. My hand reached for your swollen clit to stroke it in unison, as you moaned helplessly beneath me. Your breathing intensified as tremors inside you became unstoppable. Our movements were frantic as we raced closer and closer to our climax. The passion I felt for you matched the crackling heat of the fire and I held my course until I knew you were near. As your eyes fluttered closed, once more you whispered, “oh, fuck me. . . , oh my God, fuck me. . . , fuck me,” and I did as you commanded.

Fireworks crossed our lines of vision and gave way to seconds of darkness, as our pleasures reached its peak. Your legs wrapped around my waist to hold on tight and not let me go. As you writhed and cried out my name, your strong muscles began to milk me. With explosive cries of ecstasy, I could no longer resist! I pulsated my cum deep inside you as your pussy swallowed and gripped tighter around my cock in return. Time stood still as we raptured together in one powerful orgasm and yet – we only had just begun.

A few seconds of sweet exhaustion completely overwhelmed us as we fought to return to earth and regain our breaths once again. Our hot trembling bodies collapsed against each other in a mountain of wonderful and amazing pleasure. The seconds passed into minutes as we silently embraced each other and kissed passionately on our scorched lips. I wanted your heart tonight as much as you wanted this lovemaking to continue forever. But begging for more WAS your desire this night – our night – by the deep-blue waters of Snow Lake in the wilderness of burning love.



It was a night to remember.
02/07/2012
aliceinthehole aliceinthehole
posted part 2 here for you. amazing story! you're a great writer, so in-depth and vivid, and delicious!! lovely.
02/07/2012
PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
Quote:
Originally posted by aliceinthehole
posted part 2 here for you. amazing story! you're a great writer, so in-depth and vivid, and delicious!! lovely.
How did you do this? I've been asking everyone, but found out that the total characters was limited to 8,000 with spaces! Thanks!! Oh, I know now!! Thanks!!
02/07/2012
aliceinthehole aliceinthehole
Quote:
Originally posted by PassionateLover2
How did you do this? I've been asking everyone, but found out that the total characters was limited to 8,000 with spaces! Thanks!! Oh, I know now!! Thanks!!
just posted it in a 2nd post.
02/07/2012
Woman China Woman China
So much better than the cliche mile high club stories!!! Now THIS was airplane sex!!!!
02/07/2012
Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by PassionateLover2
I would like to submit a fantasy to the EdenLit Club. I enjoy reading erotic books and have written two book reviews with the help of my former mentor, ‘AliceintheHole’. In my opinion, reading erotica short-stories can be more captivating and ... More
Ohhh that would make a great thread post!!!!
02/07/2012
Gracie Gracie
I loved your story!
02/07/2012
wetone123 wetone123
Such a luscious fantasy! From your profile I knew you were a flier; you also made me fly with your story! Your Mrs. is one lucky lady! Keep up the great work! Wowsa!
02/07/2012
Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Loved the detail on the flight. I know only the very basics of flight, but it was nice detail that added to it and I felt more informed after reading it. I like the details and you use some very descriptive terms in the story. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

BTW, it is nice to see another shot of testosterone here. lol
02/08/2012
PeaceToTheMiddleEast PeaceToTheMiddleEast
Wow that was hot, and your writing if off the hook, keep it up hope to see more from you.
02/08/2012
wrmbreze wrmbreze
Very well done!!! You definitely need to write more on here. You should also look into doing stuff for Eden Cafe, you can earn giftcards that way.
02/09/2012
Kate Kate
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Originally posted by Woman China
So much better than the cliche mile high club stories!!! Now THIS was airplane sex!!!!
I second this! The detail in this story was amazing, you have such a talent for writing that I've noticed just from reading your reviews but now that I see it extends into writing erotic stories, you seem to be a man of many talents and a great asset to this community. I always enjoy reading your reviews and hopefully I can look forward to seeing more of your fantasy stories in the community as well!!! Again, can't say this enough...outstanding!
02/09/2012
FleurDevereux FleurDevereux
Amazing story! Is it weird that it makes me want to fly? Maybe that's just that I never have before..
Anyways, you did an amazing job portraying very vivid pictures in my mind. I just loved it!
02/13/2012
Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
So much better than the cliche mile high club stories!!! Now THIS was airplane sex!!!!
~Agreed!
02/13/2012
wildorchid wildorchid
So nice to read a story about two people deeply in love instead of the overdone "one night stand" stories. So beautiful! Short and sweet. Loved it.
02/18/2012
Gracie Gracie
Hi, I'm just back for a reread. It's even better than I remembered! I'm ready for another one! Have a great week!
02/18/2012
Gracie Gracie
Hey loverboy, you know I have a birthday coming up. I would love another story! It would be my best present!
03/14/2012
wetone123 wetone123
Although my birthday is in September, I would also consider it a present to all of us here at Eden. You have such a talent! I miss you being around
03/27/2012
PassionateLover2 PassionateLover2
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Originally posted by wetone123
Although my birthday is in September, I would also consider it a present to all of us here at Eden. You have such a talent! I miss you being around
Thank you 'Gracie' and 'Wetone123' for your kind words of encouragement. I will give thought about writing another story.
04/15/2012
Kate Kate
I thought that I had commented in this thread but I guess not! I love this story, you have such a talent for writing and attention to detail. I'm proud to have such a talented friend! I read this when you first posted it but I came back for a reread tonight and enjoyed it just as much as the first time I read it, if not more. You are quite missed around here
05/13/2012
sexxxkitten sexxxkitten
Very eloquently put! Now I want to go to a cabin and act this out!
05/16/2012
Noelle Noelle
Quote:
Originally posted by PassionateLover2
I would like to submit a fantasy to the EdenLit Club. I enjoy reading erotic books and have written two book reviews with the help of my former mentor, ‘AliceintheHole’. In my opinion, reading erotica short-stories can be more captivating and ... More
lOVE THIS, YOU ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER! LOOK FORWARD TO MORE...
06/23/2012
LuckyLady LuckyLady
Your story was very descriptive and captivating. I loved the little details you added to it. Great story! Can't wait to read more from you!
01/31/2013
spiced spiced
Thanks for sharing this cool story. I'll check out part two now...
03/17/2013
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