#EdenLit - January/February Eden Lit Club summary and assignments

Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
At this Month's meeting we discussed a few key points that elevate writing from good to excellent. Chief amoung the tips were:
*Keeping the language and action scenes simple and coherent.
*Writing where the action is. If your brain is buzzing with a certain part of the story write it out and then build the rest of the tale around that scene.
*Small grammar mistakes. Use less commas and more helping verbs!

We had Antipova join us tonight and she suggested that we do a sort of club cross over. As you no doubt know, Antipova is the club leader for the Eden Cooks Club. She has chosen Truffles as her topic for February and has asked us to write some choice erotica about, contining and saturated with truffles!
Read the chocolate and then eat the chocolate! MmmmMMMmmmmmMMM

Our topics this Month are:
*Truffles- All about the erotic, chocolate treats!
*Critical Review First Kiss- Describe that first kiss you recieved that let you know you had been kissed. Use simple but evocative language and be as descriptive as you can be. Avoid easy fixes and rushed language.
*Open Tpoic- Tell us what's on your mind!

If you are interested in writing for the club simply mail your work as an attachment to (Rayne at edenfantasys dot com) with the subject line being Eden Lit Submissions. If this is your first time writing for our club please include a small autor's bio for the blog, it doesn't have to be fancy but we'd all love to know a little bit about you!

Our deadline for submissions is January 30, 2012 and we have a limit of three submissions per author per month. If you consent to your work being published on the Eden Lit Blog you will receive a $10 gift card for and from EdenFantasys, per submission, up to a total of $30.
The deadline will be enforced and any pieces sent in after the date will be posted but may be posted after the meeting if time doesn't permit.

We are asking for finished pieces and a maximum of three pieces per author please indicate if your piece should recieve critical review. This is subject to change in the future depending on the popularity of the club.

There is no set writing style, the pieces can be anything from poetry to raunchy erotic literature. If your piece needs an introduction please include it with the submission to Rayne.
This club is open to everyone, not just writers. The pieces will be published during the two weeks before the next meeting of the writer's club, where we hope to see all of you!
01/09/2012
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Woman China Woman China
After many months of being trapped and starving for attention behind the wall, I have finally submitted my first peice of work for EdenLit in gosh knows how long!!!!

YAY ME!!! Go team me!!! I am my own personal cheerleader I know!!!

But... "First Encounters of a Three Legged Man and Tequila" should be up in the near future!!!!
01/10/2012
Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Woman China
After many months of being trapped and starving for attention behind the wall, I have finally submitted my first peice of work for EdenLit in gosh knows how long!!!!

YAY ME!!! Go team me!!! I am my own personal cheerleader I know!!! ... More
Holy crap you have no idea how excited I am to read a story with such an unusual title!
01/11/2012
Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Holy crap you have no idea how excited I am to read a story with such an unusual title!
Be warned!!! The title is such a give away!!!!!
01/12/2012
Silverdrop Silverdrop
Submitted my truffle story. It's rather nsfw.
01/12/2012
Woman China Woman China
YAY!!! It's up!!!! First one this month too!! WOOT WOOT!!!
First Encounters of a Three Legged Man and Tequila

It made me a little sad that that title couldn't but used as the linkable title or rather the title you see. Note to self!!! No more long titles!!!!!
01/12/2012
Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
YAY!!! It's up!!!! First one this month too!! WOOT WOOT!!!
First Encounters of a Three Legged Man and Tequila

It made me a little sad that that title couldn't but used as the linkable title or rather the title you see. Note to ... More
Just read it. I peeked and saw the length and thought I would go back later, but read a paragraph or two and just had to read it through. Great fun!

This is a great line: "Sucking my juices from his finger like an alcoholic falling hard from the wagon."

Loved it. Definitely worthy of some WOOT!
01/13/2012
Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Shame on y'all. I've been eating truffles for three days now trying to get inspiration for my story.

I'm supposed to be trying to LOSE weight!

At last though - I have a story idea thanks to talking to my daughter. I don't do much as far as erotica goes so it will probably be more romance...

And to celebrate when its written?

I get....

TRUFFLES of course!
01/20/2012
Silverdrop Silverdrop
My Truffles story is up.

Pure (erotica)

Whoever does the pictures for the entries found the exact truffle I was eating!
01/20/2012
Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Quote:
Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Shame on y'all. I've been eating truffles for three days now trying to get inspiration for my story.

I'm supposed to be trying to LOSE weight!

At last though - I have a story idea thanks to talking to my daughter. I ... More
Romance can be pretty damn erotic...even if it isn't all chock full of sex! I love me a great romance.
01/21/2012
BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
Can the open topic extend to erotica? I have one that I've been finishing up.
01/25/2012
Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by BBW Talks Toys
Can the open topic extend to erotica? I have one that I've been finishing up.
That's the beauty...any of them can be Erotica! (Although it is usually easier to fit the Erotica in the open category...)
01/25/2012
kadytheredpanda kadytheredpanda
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Shame on y'all. I've been eating truffles for three days now trying to get inspiration for my story.

I'm supposed to be trying to LOSE weight!

At last though - I have a story idea thanks to talking to my daughter. I ... More
I can't cook in my dorm (no kitchen), but I'm craving a Dairy Queen Midnight Truffle Blizzard like you have no idea. They are SO good. I actually almost went to the DQ across the street from my college tonight. I resisted before I got very far, though.

I'm having writer's block this time. I've been wanting to write a Mario Bros fanfic idea that has been stuck in my head for a week, but I can't even get that running. I'll be surprised if I actually submit anything this time.
01/26/2012
Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
OK, I wrote a story for the Critical Review. I cheated a little. You will know when you read it. But I managed to write a whole story with no sex. I know, I couldn't believe it either.
01/27/2012
Woman China Woman China
L'grande sigho... I am seriously really badly allergic to chocolate. And even thinking about chocolate causes me issues!!!! This is going to be one interesting meeting!!!!
01/27/2012
Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
I have ideas - and know what I want to write -just haven't yet put butt in chair and sat down to write because it has not been that quiet here lately.

I will try to get something in by the deadline but honestly - these two topics don't excite me and the free one - I can't think of a topic!
01/28/2012
Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by BBW Talks Toys
Can the open topic extend to erotica? I have one that I've been finishing up.
Open topic means just that! Give us your poor, your tired, your huddled erotica....
01/28/2012
Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Our Blog is closed to new submissions but please check this forum out for instructions if you still wish to submit some work for out next meeting:instructions!
This Month we'll discuss ways to make it an even better system.
01/28/2012
BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
My story is here: blog It's too long for a forum post (over 8,000 characters)
01/28/2012
Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Oh wow - I thought the deadline was the 30th!
01/28/2012
Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
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Originally posted by Hot 'N Sexy TexasMama
Oh wow - I thought the deadline was the 30th!
The deadline was the 30th. (You actually have a week longer if you go to that other forum that Airen linked to and read her new instructions for this months' submissions). The Community Blog is shut down by Eden...not closed for deadline of submissions. Although it is still there to read items that had been posted there already, or was as of 10 minutes ago.
01/28/2012
BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
link correction
01/28/2012
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