#Workshop - June 29th @ 9pm - Grammar Workshop

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#Workshop - June 29th @ 9pm - Grammar Workshop

Wondermom Wondermom
OMG, I can't believe this stupid apt complex I live in, they just shoved a note in our door about kids molesting and abusing the ducks! Where the hell are their parents?
06/29/2011
sexyintexas sexyintexas
I just ordered my Pikilo!!!!!
06/29/2011
cherryredhead88 cherryredhead88
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Originally posted by Jul!a
I'm working on a few reviews while I wait. I keep buying things when I shouldn't be, so I'm trying to knock out as many reviews on things I have sitting around as I can, lol.
I am doing the same thing. I got a new webcam and did all 3 of my video reviews last night, only to find out that they didn't record because the software sucks.
06/29/2011
Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by sexyintexas
I just ordered my Pikilo!!!!!
Ooh awesome! You're going to love it! Which color did you pick?
06/29/2011
sexyintexas sexyintexas
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Originally posted by Wondermom
OMG, I can't believe this stupid apt complex I live in, they just shoved a note in our door about kids molesting and abusing the ducks! Where the hell are their parents?
Molesting the ducks??? Messing with them...lol
06/29/2011
sexyintexas sexyintexas
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Originally posted by Antipova
Ooh awesome! You're going to love it! Which color did you pick?
The purple, I like it because its not the normal purple, more muted. I can't wait!!!
06/29/2011
Wondermom Wondermom
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Originally posted by sexyintexas
Molesting the ducks??? Messing with them...lol
umm I think from the letter its more than just annoying them poor ducks
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Antipova
Huh. Unless that's rude. It's always tough for me to tell, because personally, I like it when people give me ways to improve---but there are definitely people who don't.
Meh, some people are going to think it's rude, but these are most likely the same people that think that their reviews are awesome no matter what anybody else says and don't want to make them better half the time. I've only run into that once or twice, but I think that something like that is no worse than the links to the mentor program. So long as you phrase it in a nice enough manner, it should come across like the constructive criticism that it is.
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Wondermom
I just put in a new order earlier lol
Ooh, anything good?
06/29/2011
Wondermom Wondermom
they are pointing out that its a class 4 felony, so I am pretty sure its a whole lot more than just annoying them and chasing them.
06/29/2011
sexyintexas sexyintexas
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Ooh, anything good?
PIKILO!!!! I have been waiting for the free gift to change but I just couldn't wait any more, lol!
06/29/2011
cherryredhead88 cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !

I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and commas/sentences/ misspelled words.

I also realize that no one is perfect and we all make mistakes, I still have problems with commas and those em dashes myself. The goal of this workshop is to a) help everyone better understand some common aspects of writing and b) provide a place for reviewers to refer to (or refer others to) for help.

Any questions/concerns/top ics of discussion?
06/29/2011
Kake aka PoeticErotica Kake aka PoeticErotica
Hey, everyone! I'm here! However, I am multitasking, so, I may be in and out a bit. And kids molesting the ducks? I'm sorry, I know I shouldn't, but I'm lmfao!
06/29/2011
Wondermom Wondermom
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Ooh, anything good?
sliquid sample size, my first plug a vibe, the free gift and free eden bullet
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
I am doing the same thing. I got a new webcam and did all 3 of my video reviews last night, only to find out that they didn't record because the software sucks.
I'll sit down and do all of my videos at once normally. It's just easier for me to try and pump them all out that way lol. That super sucks about yours though, that's the worst!

Right now I'm just working through almost 3 full pages of assignment cart. Every time I start making progress, my stupid self goes and buys more stuff. Although most of what I bought tonight is lingerie that I'm worried is gonna get discontinued.
06/29/2011
sexyintexas sexyintexas
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Meh, some people are going to think it's rude, but these are most likely the same people that think that their reviews are awesome no matter what anybody else says and don't want to make them better half the time. I've only run into that ...
I think that most grown-ups are ok with someone giving them a little constructive criticism. If their not...ehhh.
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Wondermom
they are pointing out that its a class 4 felony, so I am pretty sure its a whole lot more than just annoying them and chasing them.
Wow, that's crazy!
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by sexyintexas
PIKILO!!!! I have been waiting for the free gift to change but I just couldn't wait any more, lol!
Lol, good for you!! I've been curious about that one, but haven't bitten the bullet yet.
06/29/2011
cherryredhead88 cherryredhead88
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Meh, some people are going to think it's rude, but these are most likely the same people that think that their reviews are awesome no matter what anybody else says and don't want to make them better half the time. I've only run into that ...
This. Unfortunately the people that probably need it the most won't think they do.
06/29/2011
sexyintexas sexyintexas
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !

I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ...
Listening patiently.
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Wondermom
sliquid sample size, my first plug a vibe, the free gift and free eden bullet
Score! That stuff sounds awesome
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !

I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ...
I think I overuse commas, and I'm very keen on learning how to break writer's block. I think I've finally figured out what works for me, but I don't know how well it'll work for everybody else, lol.
06/29/2011
Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by sexyintexas
The purple, I like it because its not the normal purple, more muted. I can't wait!!!
Cool! It does seem like a neat shade. You're going to love it!
06/29/2011
Wondermom Wondermom
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !

I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ...
sounds awesome to me
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
This. Unfortunately the people that probably need it the most won't think they do.
You said that so much better than I did, lol.
06/29/2011
sexyintexas sexyintexas
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Lol, good for you!! I've been curious about that one, but haven't bitten the bullet yet.
It looks yummy, I think that it will be yet another exciting weekend
06/29/2011
Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Alright everyone, let's get rolling! I know it is just barely 9 but I have quite a few good things to discuss, and I want to make sure I can get it all in !

I plan on discussing things from how to start writing, to writer's block and ...
I'm all ears, CRH!
06/29/2011
cherryredhead88 cherryredhead88
Alright a lot of my information is coming from the Purde OWL site, and I have a couple other links that I got from Selective Sensualist on B8tr Dude's thread about the editing program.

I would like to start by talking about how everyone starts to write their reviews.

This Purdue article on starting the writing process has some great ideas for getting a feel for how you want to start.

Who is the audience for your writing? (guys, gals, couples, etc)

What does your audience already know about this topic? (what information can you add beyond the product page?)

What does your audience need to know about this topic?
What experiences [have you had] that will help your audience?

What do you hope the audience will gain from your text?
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by sexyintexas
It looks yummy, I think that it will be yet another exciting weekend
I can't wait to read your review on it
06/29/2011
Wondermom Wondermom
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Originally posted by sexyintexas
PIKILO!!!! I have been waiting for the free gift to change but I just couldn't wait any more, lol!
at least you will get the free eve
06/29/2011
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