#Workshop - June 29th @ 9pm - Grammar Workshop

cherryredhead88 cherryredhead88
Alright I'm off to take a shower, and I had a great time being able to help some of you out! Thanks for the awesome suggestions and ideas everyone, goodnight!

Feel free to stick around and put some more thoughts in!
06/29/2011
Kake aka PoeticErotica Kake aka PoeticErotica
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Thanks, and sorry if it got kind of long. I've never done a workshop before and the information is good but it's kind of tedious.

I love that example that you used above!


I know that I have a hard time with run on ... More
It was such an amazing workshop I didn't even notice the time! Thank you so much for a truly eye-opening meeting, Cherry!
06/29/2011
Antipova Antipova
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Thanks, and sorry if it got kind of long. I've never done a workshop before and the information is good but it's kind of tedious.

I love that example that you used above!


I know that I have a hard time with run on ... More
You did a great job, Cherry! This is going to be a really great resource for everyone. I especially liked the "ask yourself questions" tips and the "writer's block surmounting" tips.

And grammar's always great to go through! You did wonderfully.
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Kake aka PoeticErotica
And if you're ever in Raleigh, we'll find something to do. Or Boston. I may be in Boston soon-ish.
Absolutely! I have family in New Hampshire, so Boston is actually really doable
06/29/2011
Alan & Michele Alan & Michele
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Alright I'm off to take a shower, and I had a great time being able to help some of you out! Thanks for the awesome suggestions and ideas everyone, goodnight!

Feel free to stick around and put some more thoughts in!
You did a great job with the workshop
06/29/2011
Kake aka PoeticErotica Kake aka PoeticErotica
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Originally posted by Jul!a
Absolutely! I have family in New Hampshire, so Boston is actually really doable
Awesome! I'll hold you to that!
06/29/2011
Wondermom Wondermom
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Run on Sentences and Fragments

Fragment Sentences

A complete sentence will have at least one subject and one verb. Sentences are considered fragments when they are missing either a subject or a verb. Consider the following two fragment ... More
I really needed this
06/29/2011
cherryredhead88 cherryredhead88
Thanks everyone!

And I forgot to thank you all for coming, I had a great time and I loved being helpful
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Alright I'm off to take a shower, and I had a great time being able to help some of you out! Thanks for the awesome suggestions and ideas everyone, goodnight!

Feel free to stick around and put some more thoughts in!
Great job, and thank you for hosting!
06/29/2011
Wondermom Wondermom
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Alright I'm off to take a shower, and I had a great time being able to help some of you out! Thanks for the awesome suggestions and ideas everyone, goodnight!

Feel free to stick around and put some more thoughts in!
thank you for all the help! I really enjoyed this and you got through to me unlike 12yrs of school lol
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Kake aka PoeticErotica
Awesome! I'll hold you to that!
I'll hold you to the Chicago bit too
06/29/2011
Wondermom Wondermom
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Originally posted by Jul!a
I'll hold you to the Chicago bit too
we can probably figure something out after august, getting ready for a convention and some stuff in the next month then we will be free
06/29/2011
Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Wondermom
we can probably figure something out after august, getting ready for a convention and some stuff in the next month then we will be free
Sounds good. I don't really have anything planned until October when we're taking a long weekend to Vegas
06/29/2011
Jobthingy Jobthingy
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
silicon or silicone?

If it’s the super-hygienic sex toy material that so many love, it’s silicone. If it’s the semi-conductive chemical element that is a major component of sand, it’s silicon. (Chances are, if seen in a review, it’s silicone.) ... More
One I see often is women used in the place of woman. 1 woman, lots of women.
06/29/2011
Jobthingy Jobthingy
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Originally posted by cherryredhead88
Alright I'm off to take a shower, and I had a great time being able to help some of you out! Thanks for the awesome suggestions and ideas everyone, goodnight!

Feel free to stick around and put some more thoughts in!
You did great Cherry! I will certainly be sending this link to future students
06/29/2011
Dusk Dusk
Had a read-through, looked like a great workshop!
07/02/2011
Ivy Wilde Ivy Wilde
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Originally posted by Petite Valentine
I know as I'm testing something out, I'm always asking "What do I have to say about this that hasn't been said before?" and "What really makes this product different from others that someone might be looking at?" ... More
LMAO! Yeah, I tend to focus on having fun first, than worry about what to write in the review later.
07/09/2011
Ivy Wilde Ivy Wilde
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Originally posted by Antipova
I read this a few months ago and liked it a lot:

from Gary Provost, quoted in Roy Peter Clark’s (terrific) Writing Tools:

This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become ... More
Very cool example. I copied and saved it.
07/09/2011
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