I Published my first article, any advice?!

burtnuh burtnuh

There is my first article, and advice on it? Maybe ways to improve, or things you did and didn't like about it? I'm always looking for feedback, thanks guys!
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burtnuh burtnuh
It might help if my phone didn't add crazy letters to the title. ha. *first *any
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