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thatonegirl thatonegirl
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05/08/2012
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nanamondoute nanamondoute
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I would recommend using a better font -- a more standard font. The current one is too fancy for easy reading.
05/08/2012
powerandintent powerandintent
It hurt my eyes so I didn't read it. Sorry.
05/08/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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It hurt my eyes so I didn't read it. Sorry.
okay new layout let me now if that helps
05/08/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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I would recommend using a better font -- a more standard font. The current one is too fancy for easy reading.
let me now what you think of the new one
05/08/2012
kendra30752 kendra30752
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I read the whole thing! I like it. I liked the story you had up as your recent post. I rarely read erotic because it all tends to be the same old story, but I did like that yours was sensual rather than hardcore, full of action and sexy and sensual scenes. I liked the combination a lot. I also thought the page was really clean, easy to follow.

I'd be interested in hearing/reading what your plans are for your blog. What types of content do you expect to be publishing? Erotica only or other things as well? Just curious.

Thanks for sharing your blog!
05/08/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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I read the whole thing! I like it. I liked the story you had up as your recent post. I rarely read erotic because it all tends to be the same old story, but I did like that yours was sensual rather than hardcore, full of action and sexy and sensual ... More
its going to be a little bit of everything were starting with how me and her started with little stories like that and we will probable talk about about some of our sexual experiences the good and the bad. I have been wanting to do a blog on this for years but have been to scared to here what people say but then i realized that im a working progress just like every one in life. please let people now about this blog.
05/08/2012
M.O.'s Girl M.O.'s Girl
I read your posts and thought your stories were good.

If I were to offer a suggestion, it would be regarding your format. In order to make reading a little easier on the eyes, it's helpful to break up your text. I can see your stories have paragraphs, as they should, but it would help the look of the page if there were spaces between the paragraphs. You can do this by just hitting "Enter" at the end of the paragraph.

Readers tend to avoid walls of text, no matter how well written the story. By breaking up the page, you are more likely to engage the reader.

Aside from that, your stories are good and I encourage you to keep writing.
05/08/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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I read your posts and thought your stories were good.

If I were to offer a suggestion, it would be regarding your format. In order to make reading a little easier on the eyes, it's helpful to break up your text. I can see your stories ... More
okay i updated that i have it right aligned then the other middle let me now how what you think
05/08/2012
M.O.'s Girl M.O.'s Girl
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okay i updated that i have it right aligned then the other middle let me now how what you think
The first story was much easier to read. Breaking up the text really helped.

As for the second story, I think aligning it to the left would be better. Again, this is generally easier on the reader's eye. However, sometimes some stories call for middle alignment, so ultimately that choice is up to the author. Narrative stories generally work better when aligned left, though.
05/08/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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Originally posted by M.O.'s Girl
The first story was much easier to read. Breaking up the text really helped.

As for the second story, I think aligning it to the left would be better. Again, this is generally easier on the reader's eye. However, sometimes some stories ... More
thanks for all your feed back it has been very helpfull. I usually lt my artistic side get away from me(like waning to put the text in the shape of a woman) so i am loving the feed back. Any thing you would like in a blog that is not usually there???
05/08/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
added another story. hope you all like it.
05/09/2012
Adriana Ravenlust Adriana Ravenlust
Would like to see more color. THe monochrome is a bit hard on the eyes. I actually find white text on black to be pretty offensive. My old age just can't handle it anymore
05/09/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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Would like to see more color. THe monochrome is a bit hard on the eyes. I actually find white text on black to be pretty offensive. My old age just can't handle it anymore
let me now if that is better on the eyes
05/09/2012
M.O.'s Girl M.O.'s Girl
I just went and took a peek at your new layout, and I love it. Very easy on the eyes, and it looks great.
05/09/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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I just went and took a peek at your new layout, and I love it. Very easy on the eyes, and it looks great.
thanks!!!!! it has been great getting all this feed back
05/09/2012
BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
As to your issue of spelling. I find that if I write my blogs in Word, it will correct all my issues for me and then I can copy/paste into Blogger. Same thing with reviews!
05/09/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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As to your issue of spelling. I find that if I write my blogs in Word, it will correct all my issues for me and then I can copy/paste into Blogger. Same thing with reviews!
it would be a good idea also cuss it would keep it all backed up on my desk top thanks
05/09/2012
BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
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it would be a good idea also cuss it would keep it all backed up on my desk top thanks
The only thing you'll have to watch out for are words that are spelled correctly, but used in the wrong place. I would run a grammar check too!

Happy Blogging!
05/09/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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The only thing you'll have to watch out for are words that are spelled correctly, but used in the wrong place. I would run a grammar check too!

Happy Blogging!
thanks all this feed back as been amazing. It has maid me glad that i have finally been making time for this and myself and my partner in all this.
05/09/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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let me now what every one thinks off the blog
05/10/2012
berrycherry berrycherry
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<3
05/13/2012
mama2007 mama2007
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I'll check your blog out. follow mine too please! Anyone else who is interested in my EF blog, follow mine please.
05/15/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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I'll check your blog out. follow mine too please! Anyone else who is interested in my EF blog, follow mine please.
followed looking forward to catching up on all your old blogs
05/15/2012
mama2007 mama2007
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followed looking forward to catching up on all your old blogs
thanks. me2 - following yours. i wanna do a giveaway on my blog but not sure who to email about it. i guess i emailed the wrong person = gary ?
05/16/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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bump
05/18/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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still looking to see how people are liking it
05/21/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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also started up a twitter for it getting excited lets hope it does not fall through
05/23/2012
thatonegirl thatonegirl
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