I read your posts and thought your stories were good.
If I were to offer a suggestion, it would be regarding your format. In order to make reading a little easier on the eyes, it's helpful to break up your text. I can see your stories have paragraphs, as they should, but it would help the look of the page if there were spaces between the paragraphs. You can do this by just hitting "Enter" at the end of the paragraph.
Readers tend to avoid walls of text, no matter how well written the story. By breaking up the page, you are more likely to engage the reader.
Aside from that, your stories are good and I encourage you to keep writing.