Any Advice?

Cherry21 Cherry21
I have posted quite a few reviews now. I have used probably WAY too many sex toys for my age, lol. I always good comments, by my ratings don't always show it. I was wondering if anyone had any advice for my reviews? Here is a few different ones I have done:

Corset

Lube

Hitachi

Thrusting Rabbit

If there is anything that I could do better, or leave out, I'd love to know! I'm very particular about my writing, and my EF reviews are some of the first things I've written that ANYONE has been allowed to read. So I'm always open for suggestions, and and all advice! Thanks all!!
12/04/2011
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Ryuson Ryuson
My first advice would be to try using the extended review template. Have you tried the review program?
12/04/2011
Cherry21 Cherry21
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Originally posted by Ryuson
My first advice would be to try using the extended review template. Have you tried the review program?
You mean the Mentor Program, lol? Yeah, I just graduated about a week ago. I will try to use the extended review template more, I just don't like it in reviews when I read the same thing over and over again. And I notice this happens alot in extended reviews.
12/05/2011
Alan & Michele Alan & Michele
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Originally posted by Cherry21
You mean the Mentor Program, lol? Yeah, I just graduated about a week ago. I will try to use the extended review template more, I just don't like it in reviews when I read the same thing over and over again. And I notice this happens alot in ... More
Maybe you could try this then: Write your review just like you always do, but then look at the Extended Template just to get ideas for anything additional that you could add to it here and there.

~M
12/05/2011
Cookie Monster Mike Cookie Monster Mike
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Originally posted by Alan & Michele
Maybe you could try this then: Write your review just like you always do, but then look at the Extended Template just to get ideas for anything additional that you could add to it here and there.

~M
I agree with this idea.

I actually enjoy the extended review system simply because I would forget all the different thing's I should add into my review. Most of the people that stop by to read your interview are generally looking for a well written and informative review. At least I do when I read reviews, I like a lot of information, different scenarios and examples of the product used. Then again, I also don't want to spend an hour reading a novel of a review

Also what helps me personally is when I'm reviewing a product that already has other reviews on it, I will read almost all of them. This will spring ideas into my head about different things I should try, or add into my review. I DO NOT however copy anything from someone else's review, never never ever.

I do agree with you Cherry21 that a lot of reviews repeat the same thing, especially if someone reviews 5 silicone toys, a lot of the time they will say the same thing about its material and texture, the cleaning and maintenance of it also. Hopefully what I have said will help in improving your reviews. If I were to add any constructive criticism to improving your reviews, I feel you could just add more detailed information and maybe personal experiences, or offer suggestions to different uses of what you are reviewing. Your Thrusting Rabbit and Corset reviews are on the right track to being more lengthy and detailed
12/05/2011
Cherry21 Cherry21
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Originally posted by Cookie Monster Mike
I agree with this idea.

I actually enjoy the extended review system simply because I would forget all the different thing's I should add into my review. Most of the people that stop by to read your interview are generally looking for a ... More
thanks so much for the advice, i really do appreciate it!
12/11/2011
Cookie Monster Mike Cookie Monster Mike
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Originally posted by Cherry21
thanks so much for the advice, i really do appreciate it!
Your quite welcome I just read some of your latest reviews and I see improvement Awesome job and congrats on rank 6.0 and Mentor Program
12/11/2011
Cherry21 Cherry21
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Originally posted by Cookie Monster Mike
Your quite welcome I just read some of your latest reviews and I see improvement Awesome job and congrats on rank 6.0 and Mentor Program
Thank you very much
12/16/2011
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