Feedback on my reviews?

ReadmyLips ReadmyLips
I would love for people that have experience to look at my first reviews and give me some feedback to improve thank you for your time!
06/18/2012
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If you're looking to get some feedback on your reviews you may want to look into the mentor program. With that program you can work one on one with an advanced reviewer who will guide you in making your reviews the best they can be. They'll answer any questions you may have and make suggestions on things to add or edit to your reviews.

If you just want to get some feedback on the forums, there's a great thread called Post Your Latest Review where you can link to your reviews and get some exposure for them. It's a little game where you rate the review posted before you and then the next person rates yours. It gets some traffic to your reviews and maybe some suggestions on what you could improve upon.
06/18/2012
Petite Valentine Petite Valentine
As Kira said, the type of feedback I believe you're looking for comes from a mentor. Check out this thread for info on finding one:

The Student's guide to the Mentor Program!

The screenshots in the first post are slightly outdated, but if you go to the last post in the thread there are screenshots showing navigation through the new layout.

I'm currently available (shameless self-promotion ) but you should read through the mentor descriptions and also look through any prospective mentor's reviews to see if he or she is a good fit for you.

Good luck, and welcome to Eden.

ETA:
I almost forgot about the monthly post:
Post your published reviews for June 2012.
It's another great way to get feedback.
06/19/2012
ReadmyLips ReadmyLips
thank you for the info I recently joined the mentor program and am excited I've done 3 reveiws on it so far so good...
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