Rough draft Rough draft

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Writing is sexy...too bad I was left wanting

It's a cute premise and the movie does offer a decent variety of scenes, but the movie doesn't follow through on its premise, so it feels kind of like a let down.
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Pros:
Varied scenes, amusing premise.
Cons:
Movie description not entirely accurate.
Rating by reviewer:
3
extremely useful review
I picked this DVD up kind of on a lark. I was intrigued by the description, about how she was writing a script, but her boss's demands kept changing because he really desires a romp with the writer.

Well, the scenes are pretty varied. Each new scene happens because Savannah's boss has decided that his last idea isn't good enough, and he wants something new. There's a decent amount of boy x girl scenes, a threesome, and a girl x girl scene. There's a little anal, lots of oral, different positions, and a little toying. The guys are pretty cute (and quite buff.) The girls are pretty (and, let me say, the one Latina girl in the girl x girl scene has an amazing ass. Even this straight girl was taken aback by it.) And I wish I could get paid to sit at home in a silky robe, writing (one day, one day...)

But there's no scene between Savannah and her boss. Very sad. At the end, she just unhooks the phone, drops the receiver into her desk drawer, and walks away. I was expecting her to storm into his office and yell at him for demanding so many changes, and that would somehow lead to her naked and bent over his desk, but no dice. So if you're hoping for a boss/employee fantasy scene, don't bother. Otherwise, it's pretty decent porn. I wouldn't go so far as to say it's as fantastic as the blurb on the back cover says it is, but I've seen worse, so...yeah. Could couples watch it together? I guess so. It didn't strike me as overly degrading towards women. It's still fairly typical "man porn" with extended blowjob sequences and whatnot, but again, I've seen worse. There were only one or two times I had to look away from the screen due to excessive spit. (I can't stand spit.) But it's tame enough that I think women would still enjoy watching it. For the most part, the language isn't too bad. The Latina in the girl x girl scene has a bit of a raunchy mouth, though. And you can easily switch scenes if you're not into, say girl x girl or anal scenes.
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  • Cherry21
    Cherry21  
    great review!!
  • Boobs and Lubes
    Boobs and Lubes  
    a bit more detail on the scenes or a breakdown would be awesome. ty for the review
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