Fifty Shades of Grey: Book One - erotic book by Vintage Books - review by ScarlettRed

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Fifty Shades of Frustration!

What a joke. I'm sure someone with more experience could have done an amazing job with this concept. Frankly, the character profiles are terrible and contradict themselves frequently. It is very difficult to read because it is absolutely atrociously written! People say she gets better as you continue, but I don't care. I'm not reading this to see her improvements. I can't help but get mad at how the author degrades Anastasia's personality faults like she does. Harsh? Maybe. True? Absolutely.
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Pros:
It's an erotic novel, with sex.
Cons:
Terrible writing, Repetitive, Contradictory, Forced style, Forced language!
Rating by reviewer:
1
extremely useful review
I'm not one to jump on band wagons. Frankly, I tried avoiding this book for as long as possible but there was a curiosity that I had in regards to it. I mean, I heard people at work talking about it, friends talking about it, even the radio talked about it! I couldn't avoid my desire to understand what this book was about. There, I said it. I wanted to understand what this "mommy porn" book was about, what an erotic novel is like, and how one would go about writing sex scenes in a novel. This was perfect, it's everywhere and everyone was reading it.

This book.. I mean "book" is far from what I thought it would be. Frankly, I haven't finished it yet. I'm going to try to keep going and come back to this review when I'm done but I don't know if I can. Frustration levels just kept building from page one all the way along until the first sex scene at almost page 100.

Part of the problem is the writer's ability to actually write. She is trying very hard, you can tell. Some words seem out of place and as if she just used a thesaurus to change it to something that sounded more sophisticated. The main frustration was the repetitiveness. She was trying to ingrain in your mind what this Anastasia Steele was like. What she thought about herself and those around her, but she beat you with a dead horse. Not only was the horse dead, but it was decaying. The writer had no regard that the character archetypes she was creating were extreme and infuriating. This girl has no confidence, self-conscious, and she constantly stumbles about. Yet this girl has guys asking her out left and right? She thinks she's ugly but everyone around her is saying how they want her? This makes no sense. Christian Grey is not the first man to show interest in her, but yet the author sets her up as if she has never had someone want her badly.

Apart from blatant disregard for the multiple ways Anastasia's character is being portrayed, the author fares no better with Christian Grey. She describes a cold and dark individual, something akin to empty. No emotions. Yet he has emotions, but you barely see them. He gets angry easily when he's not listened to, he hides his happiness, his desire, his intrigue. She constantly states how he appears to be hiding his smile or his feelings about something. Enough, really. I get it, he's a cold, calculating, emotionally unavailable, eccentric billionaire who suddenly and equivocally finds himself with every fiber desiring and needing to control this quirky, clueless, super low confidence and self imaged girl because.. well, I don't know yet, if there ever is an explanation. My assumption is because he's a broken excuse for an emotional love interest. The author tries very hard to set her up as an innocent girl who doesn't know better, with no mental filter for her words, someone that seems much younger and too immature to be 21.

Don't get me started on the first sex scene. ***SPOILER**** you've been warned. Although this is only as far as the first 100 pages or so.

She loses her virginity to the man. He gets angry she's a virgin, she asks why and BAM he's not mad, but wants to take her virginity. She's barely kissed a boy, this is how innocent the author makes her, yet she gets banged hard her first time. Also, he asks her to show him how she masturbates. An innocent girl like that? Of course she has never done that, even if she had, he should know he has to earn trust to get her to do that for him, which is going to take more than two dates. But. She. Has. Never. Masturbated. Ever. I'm sick of those one word sentence sentences too!

Oh and did I mention that she bleeds, everywhere? Yeah, yet she orgasms (vaginally and clitorally) her first time, doesn't feel any bit of pain losing her virginity, and is quite verbal. It just seems highly unlikely her first time would be like that. Oh and I can't forget. When she questions him about the contract, the BDSM, etc, she is very juvenile. Asking things like, "Do you get hurt?", "have you hurt anyone?", like she's a five year old about to get molested. And when he says he's been with 14 girls, she's not jealous, she doesn't deal with any emotions (like a girl head over heels, wants him badly, getting jealous of her room mate kissing his brother) she just thinks it's not as much as she thought and says okay. Uh? What? She immature in all the wrong places!
Experience
Terrible. I don't want to keep saying it, but it has to be said. I know nothing of the BDSM lifestyle but the characters seem far from what I would assume the life to be like. I could rant about this but I don't have enough space to write all the terrible points this book has. Again, I'm only 100 pages in. I can't imagine how I'll feel when I'm done. I'll want to smash my E-Reader!
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  • HannahPanda
    HannahPanda  
    I laughed so hard editing this because of your "Hades" tag. I hope I don't get in trouble for leaving it, but it was just too funny. I hated this book just as much as you and can't believe I wasted so much time reading it, but it was like a car crash that you just couldn't look away from.
  • Lildrummrgurl7
    Lildrummrgurl7  
    This book was terrible. Plain and simple. I don't understand the hype either.
  • ArmyWife4311
    ArmyWife4311  
    Great review, thanks for sharing.. I hated the series. Halfway through the first book I was rolling my eyes at the sex scenes.
  • Yogage
    Yogage  
    Note taken, don't read.
  • AlbrightsNaughty
    AlbrightsNaughty  
    Lol thank you soo much for the review I had thought about reading it but well after that I will stick to my Black Dagger Brother Hood books by JR Ward thanks again
  • bitch1
    bitch1  
    thanks
  • *Camoprincess*
    *Camoprincess*  
    Thanks for the review I just can't get into this. I haven't read it but hearing about all the horrible grammar along with everything else just can't do it.
  • dangerzone
    dangerzone  
    I have to agree myself but the biggest problem with this is once you are halfway through you have to finish this and now its a continuation and leaves you hanging..ugh!
  • Zach'sSexyThing
    Zach'sSexyThing  
    Thanks for the review! I have been toying with the idea of reading it. Everyone is talking about it. I just thought of it as another trend book. I laughed when talk shows brought it up constantly. It is good to know that I have not wasted my time and money purchasing and reading them. I am not going to think about reading it any more!
  • Trysexual
    Trysexual  
    Thanks for the honest review
  • Rory
    Rory  
    Nice review! Thanks! Just bought it and now I'm not sure I want to waste my time!
  • EdenUser
    EdenUser  
    Thanks for your review!
  • ViVix
    ViVix  
    Thank goodness someone else didn't like it!
  • ZZ
    ZZ  
    Loved your review, couldn't agree more.
  • Huff
    Huff  
    Great review, thanks
  • Terri69
    Terri69  
    Great review! Thanks!
  • Septimus
    Septimus  
    I just love the phrase "she immatures in all the wrong places"!
    I've been dying to read this book because I have a thing for bad literature, it usually makes me laugh-out-loud, but I'm hesitant on this one. I think it might be bad enough to piss me off.
  • socceras
    socceras  
    thanks for the review
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