Naughty nurse - costume discontinued by Coquette - review by Mass Hole Mommy

What are your measurements? Since I know reviewing one size fits most can be really tricky

I read your review and really found nothing in it about the costume but a few sentences. I found it to honestly be more of a link fest for the site than an actual review of the costume.

Sorry, but based on this review I wouldn't purchase this costume.

You have a decent start with that review. You've made lots of links, and I'm sure no one will miss who the review was from which is always appreciated. However, I feel like I didn't learn too much from your review.

If this will help, I'll let you know what I look for in a lingerie review before I purchase lingerie. You said one size fits most. Well, how much is most? I'd love measurements. I'm a bigger girl, and most "most" won't fit me, so measurements would help me know what would.

Was it just the dress or did it come with anything? How long was the dress? Was it itchy at all in any places? Does it seem like it would be good for long wear, or just for short periods? Did it accentuate anything or was it baggy? How did it tie in the back? Did it just lace of your neck?

I notice a hat was included. How does the hat stay on? Did it stay on like it was supposed to? Was the entire outfit made of good quality? Does it look like it will be lasting a long time or just a small time?

Also, how would you take care of this outfit? I know it can be hard to take care of different kinds of lingerie, but it's always good to know what care needs to be taken to preserve it.

Finally, it's not needed, but I love a recommendation about what body type you think this lingerie would look good on. Only skinny? Big breasts? Small breasts? Large or small hips? Something a lot of women like to know is how well it would work with breasts as well. Would a DD cup fit in this and would this just hang off of an A cup?

There's a lot of good ways to write a lingerie review. Checking out some of the lingerie reviews that have been rated "Extremely useful" will be a good way to get an idea of what should go in a review.

I just want to echo what Mistress Kay said. I've personally never reviewed lingerie bc they don't carry my size but yeah it'd be nice to know what this "one size fits most" means to the rest of us. This doesn't seem to be a review of the product you were given, just....links. You talk about EF more than the product you were given. I'm sorry I'm just scratching my head here in utter confusion.

Wish it was skimpier? LOL that is a new one for a con! Good to know

You guys are harsh, lol. I did this review on my personal blog, so those people know me, which is why I didn't go into sizes that much. I am 42" x 38" by 42" and normally wear an XL. The hat stayed on fine. It wasn't the focus of the costume and I forgot it was even on to be honest.

You have to remember while doing reviews that not everyone does know you. Especially if your readers are coming from here or randomly find your review. They won't know your personal history or measurements which is why we asked.

No one is being harsh but giving you helpful information to better your reviews. As Mistress Kay suggested you might want to tone down on the links and check out some of the Extremely Useful reviews for products you review to get a basic jist of what you might include. Perhaps even check out the extended review template for any future reviews you do onsite.

Thanks Juliettia. That was the 3rd piece of lingerie I've reviewed on my blog, so I had been very clear about my sizing in those reviews, so this one was geared more towards my readers, who have already seen what I'd said about that sort of thing. I was told back in the day when I did my first review to put links in there, so I wrote this one the same as the others I'd written.

Just a suggestion. If you want to gear things towards your readers, that's fine. But, in the same regard, write two separate reviews. Many of us, like me, do not know you personally. I don't know where you are in regard to body size. I don't find that many one size fit most things work for me and I am about your size.

Plus, I don't think to go and read your other reviews to see what your sizing is. Writing for your readers is fine, but maybe write a separate, more in depth review for us here. And, besides those of us who review items regularly for EF, there are many who are looking to a review to help make a decision on whether or not to purchase the item. Our job is NOT to sell the item, but the reviews do influence people.

Just a few thoughts.

Thanks.

I enjoyed your review and I completely understand as a fellow blogger! : )