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Ever written a song/poem for your lover?

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Contributor: Vaccinium Vaccinium
Quote:
Originally posted by Eden C.
My girlfriend wrote me this gem:

The ocean is wide,
The sky is grand.
Your boobs are massive,
I love your boobs.
That's beautiful.
03/08/2011
Contributor: bobowaxer bobowaxer
When I'm in love I often put something down on paper. I guess these writings could be considered poems. I usually take a line or two from these writings to put on a card but rarely do I give my love the entire "poem".
03/08/2011
Contributor: slynch slynch
No, I'm not a writer. I have created art for her. (Drawings, paintings, etc)
03/09/2011
Contributor: neon neon
yes <3
04/03/2011
Contributor: froggiemoma froggiemoma
yes but dont share
04/05/2011
Contributor: cobiffle cobiffle
I have actually written a few songs that I think went well but just if I could sing.
04/05/2011
Contributor: Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
I don't do poetry and didn't think I was that creative, but I recently met a girl and started writing Erotic Lit stories to her. I thought it was just an experiment to see if I could do it, but then I realized that a couple of them are more like epic love poems to her. And I recently created a PostSecret card for her that I have to try to get printed somewhere, but I did send it to her when it was finished.

So no to traditional poetry, but I do some creative stuff.
04/06/2011
Contributor: tickle me pink tickle me pink
I wish I had the talent to write an actual song. I've made up songs for my husband before, but they were just silly little rhymes. I prefer drawing to writing.
04/06/2011
Contributor: link82 link82
Not FOR him but ABOUT him.
04/12/2011
Contributor: Curves Curves
yep, i've written a few actually.
04/12/2011
Contributor: Willis2011 Willis2011
I made him a card once but it was no poem
04/13/2011
Contributor: K101 K101
Good poems above! I actually used to write poetry a lot. I did write a poem that was published a few years ago in Inspirations book. It wasn't for a lover though. It was actually a poem about a horrible experience I'd had as a teenager. I still have the book it was published in. I quit writing poetry and moved on to thriller stories and am currently going to school for writing! I graduate this year. I would love to read other's poetry though.
04/16/2011
Contributor: LadieWithSwagg LadieWithSwagg
its private!!!!
04/30/2011
Contributor: K101 K101
Quote:
Originally posted by Raggedy Andie
Here is something I wrote this summer..

Hey Jane, how was the weather today?
From the colour of your eyes,
I'm guessin' it was a hurricane.

Plain Jane, what did you have for dinner tonight?
You're all skin and ... more
That's a wonderful poem! It has so much power!
05/02/2011
Contributor: K101 K101
Quote:
Originally posted by PlayfulWink
Not one of my best but a quick one I through together for my lady the other day after she emailed me at work because she was feeling nervous about starting a new job:

Why the sudden apprehension?
I guess I'll have to relieve your ... more
Wow holy hell! That was damn good! I just fell in love with this last section/paragraph! That is talent! Just.. wow!
05/02/2011
Contributor: M121212 M121212
It's a song:

Penny Lane's commin' into the market,
And she's all dressed up in sparkles. Says,
"Cut me a cord of your finest baguette
And then tell me those things that I dare to forget.
You speak them so wisely to me,
And I fall for nothing but what's inside your eyes."
05/02/2011
Contributor: M121212 M121212
I love this forum discussion. It's so fun to read everybody's poems!
05/02/2011
Contributor: Princess-Kayla ♥ Princess-Kayla ♥
I haven't. But he wrote me a song once.
It was beautiful
09/02/2011
Contributor: P'Gell P'Gell
Yes, actually a number of them. I was a guitar toting hippy chick at one point in my life. (I had a couple of electrics, too. I appropriated my husband's Telecaster for my own deeds for years. Including full album on our 4 track recording machine.)

It's been a long time since I've even picked up my 12 string.
09/02/2011
Contributor: ToyGurl ToyGurl
My lover has written one for me
09/02/2011
Contributor: DiamondKoala DiamondKoala
If you can legit describe what you're going to do to someone and make them imagine it just by hearing it. It's worth knowing how to do.
02/24/2012
Contributor: FemmeFlo FemmeFlo
I wrote lots of sad poems about my boyfriend during a few months when we were broken up. He thinks they're beautiful now.
02/27/2012
Contributor: Curiouscat Curiouscat
I've written some poetry for an ex while we were dating a long time ago. I haven't done that since though. They liked it, but I just don't write poetry anymore.
02/27/2012
Contributor: Lano4ka Lano4ka
I have and still do sometimes but not as often as I should. Emotions used to be so raw
02/28/2012
Contributor: Hibangel Hibangel
Yep I write poetry, but I don't show it off.
02/29/2012
Contributor: GONE! GONE!
I've recently finished one and am working on recording it so I can surprise her with it.
02/29/2012
Contributor: SaraU29 SaraU29
Yes, but I can only bring myself to share with my special somebody!
02/29/2012
Contributor: Stinkytofu10 Stinkytofu10
Yes, but I'm quite embarrassed about them
02/29/2012
Contributor: oneeyedoctopus oneeyedoctopus
Sometimes I get in the mood to write poetry. But I haven't actually written any since high school.
02/29/2012
Contributor: corsetsaurus rex corsetsaurus rex
I have a whole journal of poems about love that none of my lovers have ever seen. They're awful. I'm pretty sure I'm somehow related to Vogons. link
02/29/2012