#EdenLit - (05.2012)-Open Topic-I've Fallen

Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
I've fallen and I can't get up,
I lay there on the floor and look at the world from a different perspective.
The pain sharpens my focus and I think of you.
In my mind's eye you are as strong as an oak tree, as big as the sun,
You shine so bright it burns me even as I reach for you.
Colors, tastes, feelings, are all subtly changed here on the floor,
My skin feels bruised and broken with the sorrow.
I have no physical scars, no outward markings to document the years,
But inside I am as torn as the sky after it weeps.
I want to share with you everything that I am, everything I could be,
You would just laugh and call me a fool.
I Have fallen, so very far, and so very deep, but I have company,
Your voice rips and echoes through my empty head.
Now that I am down here where no one can hear my screams.
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Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Hmmm...interesting. Not sure what to say. I am seeing it from a couple of different perspectives--the physical and the emotional/mental. It was flowing along well for me and then it got cruel at the end.

(It didn't help that the first thing that popped into my head when I read the last line was "It puts the lotion on its skin or else it gets the hose again!")
tami tami
i love the wway you tell the story lines
Mamastoys Mamastoys
I too love your stories!!! thanks!
Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
My version of angst riddled poetry. Honestly I have no idea where this came from except that, well there's a reason I am in therapy! I started a new drug meant to help with panic attacks and it kinda left me depressed. The dose was a tad too high, I think.

I reread this today and was all like, "Whoa way dark!" Not my usual fare at all.
thornrose thornrose
wow that beautiful.
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