I think you're off to a good start but I think you would greatly benefit from the mentor program; hell, everyone can always benefit from a little help If you ever interested in trying that, I would be more than happy to be your mentor
I agree about the menor program. It's always a good thing to help out. You're off to a good start though and you're writing about a lot about personal experience which is good. Try the extended format as well. It helps you remember everything that needs to be covered. It's almost like a nice little checklist when your writing.
Another voice for the mentor program. I'd also suggest taking a look at the higher rated reviews on the types of products that you are interested in reviewing and seeing what kind of information they tend to include.
I also noticed some questions on your reviews. A lot of them are good info to include in the review, and are specifically oriented toward your reviewing.