#Edenlit - (04.2012) Third Person Perspective-Material

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#Edenlit - (04.2012) Third Person Perspective-Material

ScarletFox ScarletFox
She was caught red-handed in aisle six. She swore she was most careful putting the item in her bag, but she was not as clever as she thought. When approached about shoplifting, her mouth fell agape. The security guard grinned with a ‘cat’s delight’ as he softly nudged her by the elbow to keep her moving along. Back to the managerial office she went. They had her sit as they stood around her with pursed lips and crossed arms. The female manager was a large woman who towered over her. The guard was of a strong ,build, lean and strong.
She was then told she had two options: pay for the item or be taken into custody. She winced, as she knew she had no money. She cringed to know that ,either way, he would have to save her. She took a deep breath and exhaled ,with frustration.
“I’d like to make a phone call.” She said.
”We make the calls around here, young lady,” said the female.
She handed her his number and told her his name. She heard the female phoning and telling him what had transpired. She grimaced as the story was recounted. Her mind drifted to his thoughts. She pictured him grabbing his briefcase and storming out of his office, to the car park, shutting the door slam!, the engine rumbling and, and,… Everything was such a mess.
His hands gripped the wheel. He cursed aloud with fury, his mind was racing, his pulse rate escalating. SHE! SHE! SHE! No such thing as rhyme or reason when it came to her. Yes, he knew she was a handful, to say the very least. It was her eyes and how he saw her soul through them. The way she smiled. The way she spoke on a variety of topics. No such thing as a dull moment. Everything was such a mess.
He was going to scrub away the tarnish, certainly.
Upon entering the store, he was greeted by the female. He shook hands with her, apologized for her actions and any inconvenience she caused. The female nodded and led him to the office. There she sat biting her nails. She crossed and uncrossed her legs. He felt her anxiety. She felt his disappointment. She looked like a deer in the headlights. Part of him wanted to whisk her away in his arms, hold her tight, and deliver gentle kisses. But he knew that that would not teach her anything. That part of him would have to come later, afterwards…
He stood in front of her. “Let’s see” he said motioning to have her show him the item. Her trembled hands held the item out to him. The guard and the female looked on curiously. He grasped it, shook his head, and placed it on the desk. Then, he took her hand in his and smacked her palm. She whimpered upon contact. This startled the other two. Again, he smacked her hand. As he did his eyes pierced into hers. Her baby blues were filling up with tears. As much as he wanted to stop and hold her, he could not. He hated this, but it was for her benefit. Again, SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! Her eyes were wide in astonishment; the pain, the audience,… the sorrow she put him through. He held her reddened hand up and said aloud, “is this how she was caught?”
He shook hands with the female and the guard. She stood behind him in the doorway holding her punished hand. Tears cascaded down her face. Her eyes focused on her feet. As they exited the store, she felt eyes looking at her foolishness.
The ride home was silent and tense. Everything was such a mess.
At home, he immediately retreated to the bedroom. She waited for him to beckon her. When he did, her stomach became uneasy. Her feet were heavy.
God knows how she made it to the bedroom.
He was hiding something behind his back. He needn’t say anything to her. Tapping on his knee was signal enough for her to drape herself over it. Her dress crept up over her bottom exposing her white silky thighs and panties. Auburn hair fell into her face. He leaned down to her, whispering, “you know, I got something today at the market and you’re going to pay for it.”
In front of her face, he swung a wooden paddle like a pendulum. She gurgled a cry. In one motion he ripped the panties right from her flesh and tossed her dress above her waist. She cupped her face with her hands. Up the paddle went, and down the paddle came on her bottom. A barrage of swats followed. Her crying was labored after the 17th swat. Three more and he
would be finished the task.
After a few moments of catching her breath, he assisted her to stand. Her auburn tresses were damp with tears. He gently stroked a few stray strands from her face. He softly lifted her face to look at him. He was met with muffled cries and resistance. She nodded her head saying she could not look at him. She was feeling unworthy of his attention.
“Come here,” he said with his arms open to her. He did not give her a chance to object; his arms swallowed her, bringing to him his treasure.
“You are worthy of me, as I am worthy of you,” he soothed. “My disappointment is that you stole when I felt I gave you everything. Do I not give you everything? Do I not share with you all that I am, all that I have?”
“You do, my beloved. You do…” she sobbed. “For once, I suppose, I wanted to get for myself, even if it meant stealing. I have nothing to give you.”
“Do not speak those words to me. Material things are musings. You are my precious treasure. I want, I have wanted, and I will always want you… no wrappings, no gift boxes, no ribbons, no receipts, just you. Trust me, you are quite a package. I have all I want and need and some ‘extras’…” She looked into his eyes and a grin came upon her face. He nuzzled her close to his chest. He played with locks of her hair.
Meekly, she looked up at him. His eyes were soft. “Never again,” he stated.
She shook her head and mouthed “never again” to him. Time ceased as they embraced.
She whispered to him, “I love you.”
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Celtic Pixie Celtic Pixie

Rage flushed her face, her heart beat erratically and cold sweat beaded at her hair line. Frustration made her eyes itch and hands curled into fists, the innocent computer steadily showed the email in black and white. Her breath was ragged as she read it again. Everything at that pointless job was unraveling, spiraling out of control, and she had no control over what was happening. Anger tightened the muscles in her stomach, cramping painfully in the hands that gripped her desk. Her vision blurred, she had to get control or she would never be able to fix this mess. This rage and frustration had to be….. put to use. The tension in her was being amplified by the fire in her blood. With shaking hands she picked up the phone.
“Buona matina Kim carissima.” The deep voice on the other end of the phone sent chills through her. “It has been so long since I have heard from you…… almost a week.” Taking a deep breath she smiled “Can you make a special trip over?” Kim asked twisting the Burmese scarf at her neck into a stretched and tangled disaster.
“MMMMMM” the sound was like a buttery piece of candy being savored. “ Sounds like a bad day, you need to be in control yes? I will be over in a minute”
When the doorbell rang, her heart started beating wildly. She opened the door to a tall elegant figure in stilettos and a pink cotton dress. “Kim.” Her name was said like a secret promise, half delight, all anticipation. She stepped in and closed the door. Kim stepped forward all that anger had turned to delicious sexual energy. “Hello Jessica.” She smiled “beautiful dress…. Take it off” Her smile turned submissive and she slowly unzipped the side of the dress and let it fall around her ankles. Kim relished the details, the perfect bun, long lashes, tight corset, full breasts, perfect hips, just lush enough to make a girls mouth water, thigh highs and that promising bit of skin between. Jessica moved forward her head slightly bowed and knelt at Kims feet. She ran her hands up to the hem of her suite skirt and stopped. Kim smiled “go ahead” She smiled slowly and continued lifting the edge of the skirt, pressing soft kisses along her leg, up and up. Her hands deftly moved the small scrap of silk to one side, while her hands unzipped the skirt letting it fall. Her mouth pressed hotly over her at the junction of her legs. Jessica slipped her tongue inside the shaved lips and kissed deeply. Kim grabbed the tight brown bun and jerked it roughly out cascading brown hair over her shoulders. Moaning in pleasure Kim twisted away from her hungry mouth. She shoved the brunette back onto the thick carpet and watched her sprawl on her back. Kim growled low in her throat and moved to ravage Jessica’s mouth. She tasted herself and lust. She ripped open the corset, filling her hands with ripe round breasts. Her hot kisses traced Jessica’s jaw, shoulder, collar bone and finally clamped on her tight nipple. Jessica arched and writhed twisting to rub herself against Kim. Smiling as she sucked harder Kim carefully slipped the leather restraints around her delicate wrists and pulled tight. Jessica whimpered in anticipation. Her now bare skin glistening with sweat. Kim ran a hand gently down her body caressing every delicately sensitive area. She caressed, teased and licked, all the while wriggling from her sensible suite. She reached under the edge of the couch and pulled out a non descript black box. Biting the inside of Jessica’s thigh she selected a smooth slim cool piece of glass.
“Beg me.” She whispered. Jessica whimpered her thick accent making the please even more delightful. “Please mistress please, I need it.” Kim smiled and slowly inserted the glass toy. Jessica whimpered again and twisted trying to force it deeper. “Oh no.” Kim relished the control, “we are going to take this ever so slow.” She teased pushing the slim toy in and pulling it slowly back out all the while working the delicate pink clit with her tongue. Her other hand fondled Jessica’s breast pinching and stroking in rhythm to the slow penetration. Jessica cried out in frustration “Oh Please Mistress Please.” Kim slipped the double ended vibrator into her strap on. Her enjoyment was complete as she filled each hand with lush breast and shoved the vibrator into Jessica’s wet pussy. Jessica screamed in ecstasy and wrapped her long legs around Kim’s waist. Delighted she pulled out thrusting back in and twisted her hips to rub the vibrations between them. She ground against Jessica’s clit sending Jessica over the edge and herself as well.
As the tension melted away with the last waves of orgasm Kim undid the ties. She pulled on the silk robe tossed over the couch and handed one to Jessica as well. She giggled and stood up. “ I am going to take a shower before I get back to work. Are you ok now Carissima?” Kim smiled and kissed her softly “Yes love, I will see you when you get off work tonight….. wanna go out to dinner?”
Woman China Woman China
My apologies for not being able to give any form of comment as I am unable to read your passages simply because of their layouts.

My eyes turn red and go wonky when I cannot see a paragraph. And yes, that is my anal retentiveness popping up.
Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
Okay ladies. Thhose had some interesting ideas. And I enjoyed some of the imagery that some of the phrasing brought to mind, but it really needs to be gone over and split into better paragraphs and punctuation. They read like Tom Robbins crossed with Kerouac, crossed with ee cummings. There are some fine ideas there, but they need to be fleshed out and given more time to develop. That said, there is a lot of potential there!
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