Eden Lit- March 14, 2011 at 7pm: Writer's Club

Contributor: BBW Talks Toys BBW Talks Toys
I didn't read, but I'm here.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Speaking of those pictures I nearly fell off my chair laughing when I saw the ones chosen for my work....the pic of the woman with her panties around her ankles was hilarious given the content of the poem.
The look on the dog's face for the second one was exactly what my dog was looking like when he ran into the room! >.< He was so proud of his new plaything.
03/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
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Originally posted by Jul!a
I wouldn't either.


And as a perhaps not so subtle hint, I know every now and then the publishing companies put out calls for new stories, you should definitely look at entering some of your stuff, Woman
Definitely your work is great.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Speaking of those pictures I nearly fell off my chair laughing when I saw the ones chosen for my work....the pic of the woman with her panties around her ankles was hilarious given the content of the poem.
The look on the dog's face for the ... more
I LOVED your poems Airen!!!!

The Masturbation Mishap one??? Priceless!!!!
03/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
Definitely your work is great.
Thanks SexyTabby!!!
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by BBW Talks Toys
I didn't read, but I'm here.
Hey there BBW Welcome!
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Woman China
I LOVED your poems Airen!!!!

The Masturbation Mishap one??? Priceless!!!!
I thought a gentle reminder would be in order since it's something we harp on continually here at F!
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Jul!a
I wouldn't either.


And as a perhaps not so subtle hint, I know every now and then the publishing companies put out calls for new stories, you should definitely look at entering some of your stuff, Woman
OMG Yes she should!
03/14/2011
Contributor: SexyTabby SexyTabby
The Good Dog one was a trip. So see that happening in my house but with kids not parents lol
03/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I thought a gentle reminder would be in order since it's something we harp on continually here at F!
"My eyes filled with tears ’till I was near blind.
The moral of the story is plain to be seen,
If a trip to the ER doesn’t make you feel keen,
Remember to use toys with grace and with care,"

This part reminded me that I have to be careful as I always seem to get hurt doing the simplest of things.

No flared base... stay away from my tush!!! Should make that a bumper sticker
03/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Woman China
"My eyes filled with tears ’till I was near blind.
The moral of the story is plain to be seen,
If a trip to the ER doesn’t make you feel keen,
Remember to use toys with grace and with care,"

This part reminded me that I have ... more
Lmao, I laughed so hard at that story!
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Were you guys surprised to read about the real St. Patrick? I know I was! I realized as I sat with a blank notebook page in front of me that I really didn't know ANYTHING about the man, himself. So I went to the source and accessed the Catholic Archives and found out the real story...really interesting stuff he went through.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
OMG Yes she should!
I will have to look out for that. But I really would want to get my favourite erotica writer published first.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Were you guys surprised to read about the real St. Patrick? I know I was! I realized as I sat with a blank notebook page in front of me that I really didn't know ANYTHING about the man, himself. So I went to the source and accessed the Catholic ... more
Crap, I didn't get a chance to read that one. But now I'm definitely going to go read it. I always love hearing about "the man behind the legend" stuff.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Were you guys surprised to read about the real St. Patrick? I know I was! I realized as I sat with a blank notebook page in front of me that I really didn't know ANYTHING about the man, himself. So I went to the source and accessed the Catholic ... more
YES!!!!

We were always taught in school that he was the patron saint because he got rid of all the snakes.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by SexyTabby
The Good Dog one was a trip. So see that happening in my house but with kids not parents lol
LOL Ya it wasn't my Mother's favorite visit lemme tell ya! My Father in law couldn't stop chuckling at how embarassed I was...
03/14/2011
Contributor: danellejohns danellejohns
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Were you guys surprised to read about the real St. Patrick? I know I was! I realized as I sat with a blank notebook page in front of me that I really didn't know ANYTHING about the man, himself. So I went to the source and accessed the Catholic ... more
Yes, I could not believe I hadn't come across that information before.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Woman China
YES!!!!

We were always taught in school that he was the patron saint because he got rid of all the snakes.
In a sense it is true but if you know anything about Ireland you know there are, in fact, snakes there! The druids called themselves 'Adders' as the adder was sacred to the Goddess. They said that they fed from her Adder's milk.
So when it is said that St. Patrick drove the snakes out of Ireland they are talking about the Druids.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Ooooooh!!!!! Carrie really picked a lovely theme!!!! Made my first comment on the actual blog and oooooohhhh ahhhhh purdy purdy!!!
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Woman China
"My eyes filled with tears ’till I was near blind.
The moral of the story is plain to be seen,
If a trip to the ER doesn’t make you feel keen,
Remember to use toys with grace and with care,"

This part reminded me that I have ... more
Another marketing idea! "No flare...no love!"
03/14/2011
Contributor: danellejohns danellejohns
I found it interesting that the day ends up falling on Easter. I also loved Merridia's story. So full of imagery.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
The alst story was posted by my real life friend Meridia and is a work in progress. It's a pretty involved story but she assures me it will get steamy in some parts! What did you guys think?
03/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
Quote:
Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Another marketing idea! "No flare...no love!"
LOL!!!! I think it would work!!!!
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by danellejohns
I found it interesting that the day ends up falling on Easter. I also loved Merridia's story. So full of imagery.
She has a real flare for roleplaying and writing such intricate descriptions doesn't she?
03/14/2011
Contributor: danellejohns danellejohns
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
The alst story was posted by my real life friend Meridia and is a work in progress. It's a pretty involved story but she assures me it will get steamy in some parts! What did you guys think?
I am looking forward to reading the continuation of it. I think the imagery and the character development was well done, in my opinion.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Jul!a Jul!a
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
The alst story was posted by my real life friend Meridia and is a work in progress. It's a pretty involved story but she assures me it will get steamy in some parts! What did you guys think?
I'm in the middle of it right now, and so far I think it's pretty awesome.
03/14/2011
Contributor: danellejohns danellejohns
It does get pretty steamy at the end there, very determined that one is.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
So any thoughts on what we should write about next month? I'm thinking Spring could be a theme...I know I'm pining for some warm balmy spring days! What do you guys think?
03/14/2011
Contributor: Woman China Woman China
I enjoyed it, lots of great imagery and descriptions, and good character development as well. But the lack of paragraphs for me took away from the story as a whole as I had to stop rest my eyes, then come back.

Even though the words were amazing on the page, it was not as steamy as it would have been for me as I ended up reading it in a few sittings over time.
03/14/2011
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by danellejohns
It does get pretty steamy at the end there, very determined that one is.
That was exactly the words Mer used to describe Pandora...determined and bloody minded!
03/14/2011