#EdenLit - (01.2012) Open Topic

Cedarlooman Cedarlooman
This is actually the first or second story I ever wrote. I haven't shared it here before this...I hope you all enjoy.

Susie Cleans Up

Susie was running late, again.

It was her favorite and best paying client, too. The professor was always well mannered and wasn’t nearly as grabby as her others were. She really hated the thought of anything that could lose him. She had only been doing this for a few months, but had so far been pretty lucky with her clients. Who knew that an ad on craigslist could lead to such a lucrative supplemental income?

She fondly remembered how naïve she had been when she placed the ad: “College student available for housecleaning. There is no job too tough. I love to get dirty! I do dishes, vacuuming, windows, bathrooms, etc. no problem. Extra services available for additional fees.”


The rest of the story is available through the link.
02/02/2012
  • Save 60% on Spooktacular Kits  - 3 item set
  • Wicked Treats - Save 60% on 3 Item Set

    • Eden leather blindfold
    • Flaming amour silicone pearl bunny
    • Eden's glass ben wa balls
    Save 60% on 3 Item Set

    Expires on Oct, 31 at 3am ET Terms

  • Ghost Bride - Save 60% on 3 Item Set

    • Casper
    • Leather strap rider
    • Simple Clamps
    Save 60% on 3 Item Set

    Expires on Oct, 31 at 3am ET Terms

  • Black Magic - Save 60% on 3 Item Set

    • Eden Beaded Clamps
    • Heart Silicone Beads
    • Onyx
    Black Magic - Save 60% on 3 Item Set

    Expires on Oct, 31 at 3am ET Terms

  • Better Price Sale - Save 70%
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
All promotions
Woman China Woman China
I left this comment on your blog.... [italics|You know... it is an interesting twist. But I'm left wondering how would this story be changed if you wrote it from a man's perspective rather than a woman's?]

I am keen to see something of your's from a man's point of view!!!! You have an unique ability to describe many things... I would love to see you write man thoughts. But then again, I have always been keen on seeing man thoughts!!!
02/03/2012
Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
Quote:
Originally posted by Woman China
I left this comment on your blog.... [italics|You know... it is an interesting twist. But I'm left wondering how would this story be changed if you wrote it from a man's perspective rather than a woman's?]

I am keen to see ... More
I second that wistful desire as well! Some of the stories you have written from a man's perspective have been amazing.
02/08/2012
Total posts: 3
Unique posters: 3