#Eden Lit Club Meeting- Getting Started - March 11, 2013 at 4 pm EDT

Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Rayne Millaray
Hey y'all! Sorry I'm late. Lost track of time. :/

See, I don't do that! Character building and such. My stories almost always start with a conversation. I learn who the characters are as they speak.

Getting started, for me, ... more
Maybe Journaling To End Writer's Block would help! Sounds like a great idea to sort of let the dialogue happen and then build the story around it!
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Contributor: Rayne Millaray Rayne Millaray
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
What goes through your mind when you sit down to put all the pieces together, so to speak?
For me, it's usually a run down of observations. I once wrote a series of short stories that started with the clink of two coffee mugs. My focus was verbally describing the scenes so well the reader felt like they were there when it happened. I dunno if I succeeded, but what was going through my head at the time was the memory of the sound, the scent of coffee brewing on the air, whether the kitchen was a common living space, or an industrial kitchen, and so on.
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Contributor: Rayne Millaray Rayne Millaray
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Maybe Journaling To End Writer's Block would help! Sounds like a great idea to sort of let the dialogue happen and then build the story around it!
It's been... a while since I've journaled. I should start again.
03/11/2013
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Okay, sorry guys. Just writing up the request to have the dev team look into the refresh issue. With the party tomorrow night, need to get that fixed as soon as possible.
03/11/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Rayne Millaray
For me, it's usually a run down of observations. I once wrote a series of short stories that started with the clink of two coffee mugs. My focus was verbally describing the scenes so well the reader felt like they were there when it happened. I ... more
Sounds interesting! Isn't it amazing what will spark our inner muse? I was writing all about how to describe a scene and wrote:

The day was warm and fragrant with freshly cut grass. The water sparkled on the pond as the wind played ripples upon its surface. She was wearing a pink cotton sundress and giant sun hat that required her to place a hand every once and a while on the crown to keep it from being blown away in the playful breezes. The birds called to her and she tiled up her head, closing her eyes in ecstasy at the blues, yellows and greens of the day.

"You look like a wild fae, my dear, all red hair and freckles like sun kisses across your nose!" The man spoke in low tones, unwilling to break the spiritual hush that the meadow offered. The woman smiled at him and sat on the red and white blanket across from the laden picnic basket. He handed her a flute of champagne and a plump strawberry. He watched as the rim of her hat raised slowly until he could see the clear green of her eyes flashing mischief and happiness. She studied him for a moment before lifting the berry to her lips and biting into the tart succulence before sipping the bubbly wine.

Her companion was classically attractive, and why not? He looked as though he had stepped out of a photo of the past in his grey chinos, lavender button down shirt and dark, business cut hair. His slight stubble accented his kissable mouth and when he smiled things tightened low in her belly.


It was based on a single scene from a movie I had paused to write the lesson. The actors were frozen in place and I just write what I saw.
03/11/2013
Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
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Originally posted by Ansley
Okay, sorry guys. Just writing up the request to have the dev team look into the refresh issue. With the party tomorrow night, need to get that fixed as soon as possible.
And that would be why Stormy is awesome.
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Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Ansley
Okay, sorry guys. Just writing up the request to have the dev team look into the refresh issue. With the party tomorrow night, need to get that fixed as soon as possible.
Amen to that!

The screeching and wailing....and drunken brawling that will occur! Seems to be fixed on my end though.
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Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by SneakersAndPearls
And that would be why Stormy is awesome.
I try.
03/11/2013
Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Sounds interesting! Isn't it amazing what will spark our inner muse? I was writing all about how to describe a scene and wrote:

The day was warm and fragrant with freshly cut grass. The water sparkled on the pond as the wind played ... more
That's a really neat exercise!
03/11/2013
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Amen to that!

The screeching and wailing....and drunken brawling that will occur! Seems to be fixed on my end though.
Are you refreshing or simply replying?
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Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Great, now Eden lit is going to be a troubleshooting meeting...hehehehe
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Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Ansley
Are you refreshing or simply replying?
I was refreshing but it seems to be fucking up again
03/11/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Ansley
Great, now Eden lit is going to be a troubleshooting meeting...hehehehe
Better here than at a public even that will get the whole forum in an uproar.
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Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Better here than at a public even that will get the whole forum in an uproar.
Oh, come now. Everyone loves a good riot, right?
03/11/2013
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Better here than at a public even that will get the whole forum in an uproar.
Don't even....thank god there's a bit of a time difference that we can wiggle with...
03/11/2013
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by SneakersAndPearls
Oh, come now. Everyone loves a good riot, right?
Have you seen the riots around this place?
03/11/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by SneakersAndPearls
That's a really neat exercise!
Well it showed the fine line between too much description and too little. We learned exactly what we needed to know about the female and the male, the setting they were in, and possibly what they were about to do.

The story could go in ANY direction all on it's own without my forcing it or being bound by it.
03/11/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Ansley
Have you seen the riots around this place?
Holy cow they look like a flaming version of an English football match! Only with words and threats rather than sticks and stones. Then it all spills onto the interwebs where it breeds and grows like malevolent spiderlings of complete evil.
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Contributor: Ansley Ansley
I was able to refresh:

Browser roll call!

(I'm on chrome)
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Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
I suppose we could start an Eden Lit riot...it would have body, substance and possibly be entertaining to read!
03/11/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Ansley
I was able to refresh:

Browser roll call!

(I'm on chrome)
me too
03/11/2013
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
I suppose we could start an Eden Lit riot...it would have body, substance and possibly be entertaining to read!
LOL now that could be fun
03/11/2013
Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
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Originally posted by Ansley
I was able to refresh:

Browser roll call!

(I'm on chrome)
Firefox.
03/11/2013
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
Holy cow they look like a flaming version of an English football match! Only with words and threats rather than sticks and stones. Then it all spills onto the interwebs where it breeds and grows like malevolent spiderlings of complete evil.
They've definitely been a challenge.
03/11/2013
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
Anyway so back to this whole literary thing we're trying to pull off here...
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Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
ok so for all those lurkers who will read this meeting after the fact and forget to post and then wander off again...

What advice would you give a writer who has demons whispering to them about how terrible he or she is at writing?
03/11/2013
Contributor: Ansley Ansley
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
ok so for all those lurkers who will read this meeting after the fact and forget to post and then wander off again...

What advice would you give a writer who has demons whispering to them about how terrible he or she is at writing?
Silence that bitch with drugs and/or alcohol. I'm only mostly kidding.
03/11/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
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Originally posted by Ansley
Silence that bitch with drugs and/or alcohol. I'm only mostly kidding.
That's one way I suppose...and many writers, including Ernest Hemingway, choose that option.

What about writing with a pseudonym so that if the work is ill received then it doesn't sting so badly?
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Contributor: SneakersAndPearls SneakersAndPearls
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Originally posted by Airen Wolf
ok so for all those lurkers who will read this meeting after the fact and forget to post and then wander off again...

What advice would you give a writer who has demons whispering to them about how terrible he or she is at writing?
I've read (but haven't tried) that you should draw a picture of your inner critic/demon. Then, when they annoy you, you flip the picture over so you can't see it.
03/11/2013
Contributor: Airen Wolf Airen Wolf
What I did was find someone I trusted to read my work and criticize it as harshly as they could. No one is ever more critical of someone else's work as they are about their own.
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