#Workshop - Nov. 30th @7pm: "Writer's block" and "Follow-ups - any gravy left in that toy?"

read the paradise island review...

hmm.. it's a little short. i recommend reading other reviews on the same porns to get some ideas.

also, if you can, go into detail about the production quality. how was lighting? sound? camera angles? shots? was it like a soap opera, a documentary, a homemade movie, a high production film?

what about the actors' dialogue deliveries? were they stiff? in this film, it's helpful to note this special style of porn, which is very candid and has NO script or plot.

also, a scene by scene outline isn't necessary, and can get a little boring for the reader. and you dont' want to spoil the ending!

note the actors' appearances, how they seem to enjoy or not enjoy the sex, etc. also, to add the features of the DVD, including runtime, incorporate it into the review instead of just copy/pasting from the product profile page.



such as... this movie was quite long enough with 2 hours total of sexytime. the dvd menu included such features as cumshot recaps, slideshow, and chapter selection. it was a really high quality DVD.


also, comment on the DVD case. does it have photos? is it ghetto looking and looks like you coulda made it at home?


and comment on if you've ever noticed these actors in other things before, and if you'd like to search for them more now that you've seen them in this. less

I have two reviews I REALLY have to get on.


8" Emperor

and


Deep Secret less

I have two reviews I REALLY have to get on.


8" Emperor

and


Deep Secret less