Hey all! I've finally gotten back into the swing of things and have found joy in writing reviews for items again. That being said: what can I add to my reviews to make them more interesting for you? I love adding photos but sometimes I feel like they're not that informative. Should I add more personal experiences? Should I compare items to similar items I own? More size comparisons? Maybe you'd like more information about how the toy works, how it charges, etc. Check out my reviews and let me know!
What can I do to improve?
01/10/2020
- 1
- 2
- 3
- 4
- 5
Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated!
01/10/2020
I have always felt that lots of good photos really help make a review better and personal experiences with the toy complete the review for me. It shows that you really tried it out and thought it through.
01/10/2020
Dear sevennn!
You are already doing pretty great!
As far as your review shows a product in all its glory, as far as it is interesting to read and contains all important info about a toy, it is a wonderful review. Photos are incredibly helpful, IMO, because they help to see the real view of a product. Try to make your pics clear enough. I haven't noticed you submitted blurred photos, but it is a common problem for many reviewers.
Size comparisons are another useful info that would be nice to add.
As a matter of fact, you may find all technicals details about a product on its product page, but your personal experience is unique information that only you can provide, so it has a great significance in a toy review.
And the last thing I'd like to mention is the importance of correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Bunch of errors makes reviews almost impossible to understand. But you are ok with that, your reviews are always very well-written
I'm extremely grateful to you for the wonderful reviews, and wish you to keep up great work!
You are already doing pretty great!
As far as your review shows a product in all its glory, as far as it is interesting to read and contains all important info about a toy, it is a wonderful review. Photos are incredibly helpful, IMO, because they help to see the real view of a product. Try to make your pics clear enough. I haven't noticed you submitted blurred photos, but it is a common problem for many reviewers.
Size comparisons are another useful info that would be nice to add.
As a matter of fact, you may find all technicals details about a product on its product page, but your personal experience is unique information that only you can provide, so it has a great significance in a toy review.
And the last thing I'd like to mention is the importance of correct spelling, grammar and punctuation. Bunch of errors makes reviews almost impossible to understand. But you are ok with that, your reviews are always very well-written
I'm extremely grateful to you for the wonderful reviews, and wish you to keep up great work!
01/10/2020
I'm probably not qualified to comment but I think your reviews are great already!
01/18/2020
I agree! I think your reviews are great! I agree with Leila and Soundside with their suggestions too!
01/19/2020
Sevenn,
I realize that I'm a little late to the party on this, but I wanted to make a suggestion.
You are off to an absolutely fantastic start with your reviews. However, if you feel like you would like a little more one on one with your reviews, what I suggest is going into the Mentor program and finding a Mentor who shares the same interests that you do. They are absolutely wonderful people and they can give you tips and tricks on how to improve.
Become a student! Take a class from someone! Hell, do one class and then take another class from another mentor who writes reviews that you enjoy! There's no real limit on how many mentors you can reach out to, and they all can give you the advice that you need.
Sincerely,
M.
I realize that I'm a little late to the party on this, but I wanted to make a suggestion.
You are off to an absolutely fantastic start with your reviews. However, if you feel like you would like a little more one on one with your reviews, what I suggest is going into the Mentor program and finding a Mentor who shares the same interests that you do. They are absolutely wonderful people and they can give you tips and tricks on how to improve.
Become a student! Take a class from someone! Hell, do one class and then take another class from another mentor who writes reviews that you enjoy! There's no real limit on how many mentors you can reach out to, and they all can give you the advice that you need.
Sincerely,
M.
04/21/2020
Total posts: 7
Unique posters: 6