Need some grammar help with a slogan

Contributor: Eugler Eugler
Hey folks...

I need some help by native speakers:

How would you do the slogan:



Do you want to spice things up in the bedroom? - Try lucid dreaming!

Want to spice things up in the bedroom? Try lucid dreaming!

Wanna spice things up in the bedroom? Try lucid dreaming!




Which one sounds best?
04/23/2013
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Contributor: GirlOnGirl GirlOnGirl
Wanna spice things up in the bedroom? Try lucid dreaming!
04/23/2013
Contributor: LoveX LoveX
I think "Wanna spice things up in the bedroom" sounds best too.
04/23/2013
Contributor: PeaceToTheMiddleEast PeaceToTheMiddleEast
I also agree with "Wanna spice things up in the bedroom".
04/23/2013
Contributor: tami tami
Quote:
Originally posted by Eugler
Hey folks...

I need some help by native speakers:

How would you do the slogan:



Do you want to spice things up in the bedroom? - Try lucid dreaming!

Want to spice things up in the bedroom? Try lucid ...
wanna spice things up in the bedroom? Try lucid dreaming!
04/23/2013
Contributor: KinkyKatieJames KinkyKatieJames
Although I tend to prefer proper grammar, "wanna" works well in this instance.
04/23/2013
Contributor: Eugler Eugler
Thank you very much!

04/24/2013
Contributor: edeneve edeneve
all of them are ok. the wanna one sounds really casual if that's what you're looking for.
04/24/2013
Contributor: Eugler Eugler
Hey there!

I've been thinking about a new slogan and need a little help with prepositions.



Wanna experience new adventures between the sheets? Try lucid dreaming!

Or would you say

Wanna experience new adventures in the sheets? ...

Thank you very much!
05/29/2013
Contributor: PropertyOfPotter PropertyOfPotter
Quote:
Originally posted by Eugler
Hey there!

I've been thinking about a new slogan and need a little help with prepositions.



Wanna experience new adventures between the sheets? Try lucid dreaming!

Or would you say

Wanna experience new ...
I would say, 'Want to' rather than 'Wanna' because I think it sounds better, but I would leave the last part off. It makes more people curious.
05/29/2013
Contributor: Eugler Eugler
Thank you very much.

And do you say 'in the sheets' or 'between the sheets'?
05/31/2013