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Contributor: just a sub just a sub
i want to write a review but after reading all the good ones im scared to. i dont know what to put in a review or what words to say! im not a good writer but i want to improve! im afraid no one will like my review b/c ive seen a lot of new people writing reviews and no one likes them. is there someone that can help me with my review?
11/17/2010
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Contributor: ToyGeek ToyGeek
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Originally posted by just a sub
i want to write a review but after reading all the good ones im scared to. i dont know what to put in a review or what words to say! im not a good writer but i want to improve! im afraid no one will like my review b/c ive seen a lot of new people ... more
Sign up for the mentor program, and you'll have someone to teach you the ropes and help with your first few reviews. Good luck, and welcome to EF!
11/17/2010
Contributor: Illusional Illusional
Quote:
Originally posted by just a sub
i want to write a review but after reading all the good ones im scared to. i dont know what to put in a review or what words to say! im not a good writer but i want to improve! im afraid no one will like my review b/c ive seen a lot of new people ... more
There's the mentor program, of course.

Lots of friendly people here.

I was scared at first too, there are some KILLER reviewers on here, but everyone's friendly and open as long as you return the same.
11/17/2010
Contributor: J's Alley J's Alley
Well...you have been told about the Mentor Program, we also have the extended template you can use.

What I did was read some highly rated reviews on similar products and [literally] wrote what points the reviewer covered and made sure I covered those as well.

To this day I have a ton of "oh crap, I forgot ____ in my review" moments, it really isn't a big deal.
11/17/2010
Contributor: ToyTimeTim ToyTimeTim
If you do not want to go threw the mentor program, you can always ask some one to proof read it for you. Copy and paste to an private message or email it. I know for a fact that a lot of reviewers would do this for you, as I have done it myself.

But really, try out the mentor program. You will get a lot of good help with your review's and with the site in general. Plus when you graduate you are a advanced reviewer. Sweet eh?
11/17/2010
Contributor: Not here Not here
Everyone has given great suggestions! I, too, recommend that you join the mentor program if you are nervous about your ability. I had been an advance reviewer for about 6 months before the mentor program was available, but still decided to join it so I could hone my skills. It takes time to be as good as some of the reviewers are, and trust me, most of them didn't start out writing perfect reviews. In time, you will find what style of writing suits you, and what types of things are absolutely necessary to include in a review.

Like Dwtim said, if you don't want to do the mentor program,I'm sure someone would be happy to proof read and offer some help. Feel free to message me if you have any questions. I may not be the highest ranked reviewer by any means, but I'm sure I could offer you some help- even if it means referring you to another reviewer for advice.

But, all in all, the best route is to join the mentor program, get to know the community, read reviews and make note of what people consider extremely useful. In no time, you'll get the swing of things and feel like you've been reviewing forever!
11/17/2010