Eden Lit Club Meeting January 9, 2012 at 7pm
We will be discussing our topics:
*Critical Review Topic- New Beginnings or Starting Over We are going to get the ball rolling this Month with a nod to the New Year. This topic is very broad and can include just about anything pertaining to starting over and new beginnings. If you choose this topic please indicate that this is the critical review topic so we can give you some really good feedback!
*Choices- Yup it's January again and a new year. What are some choices you have made in the past year (or in your life) that are infleuencing you now? Do you need to make some choices? Perhaps you have a favorite character in a story you are writing that has to make some choices...you get the idea!
*Open Topic- Tell us what's on your mind or blow us away with your eroticism! Your choice, your topic. If you would like a critical look at your work just indicate and we will accommodate the request as time permits.

Please check out our blog and pay special attention to the Critical Review items for the discussion. We'll be discussing the other works as time permits and also deciding if we'd like to have a Birthday party in February for our club! less

I'm confused about what this is suppose to be about and what I should think about and then type.

I am a new beginer to sex toys so I can type about all the hesitations, confusions and the general myths I've been told. As well as genearl point of view in regards to well they said. less

I probably won't be able to make it to the meeting due to time zones. Can you make a quick summary post near the end of the meeting saying what has been agreed about topics and such? I couldn't figure it out last time, so never ended up writing anything. less

I know I have to stop and check myself. I often use very long sentences and tend to overuse commas. When I really get into a story I zone out and repeat words. So my fist edit is to always go back through and pull out a bunch of commas and then use the find feature to see how often I use words like "softly" or "suddenly". less

You know, that's something that I've noticed from time to time. So if I wanted to inject a bit of pulse pounding, I should make it clear right from the beginning that that's what the heroine notices first, and then takes in the rest of the scene, yes? less

What happens if they toss in this;

Upon waking, she realised her hands were bound to the headboard and began to panic...

But I'd never write that. I'd make that into two sentences.

But I get what you are saying. I find newer writers seem to skip or not pay enough attention to the small things, and run through everything without breathing. less

What happens if they toss in this;

Upon waking, she realised her hands were bound to the headboard and began to panic...

But I'd never write that. I'd make that into two sentences.

But I get what you are saying. I find newer writers seem to skip or not pay enough attention to the small things, and run through everything without breathing. less

Good morning from the Land of the Middle Kingdom!!! I've got coffee (the real stuff)!!!!

I might have to dash away early, but before I do, I'd like to suggest a topic for next months assignment... "Writing hints". Basically, little hints that you've picked up along the way to put into your writing to make it feel more ooomphish.

I know that's not a word but think making a fist and saying it. less