As for lotions, perhaps a comparison to other brands you've used? Sometimes it's difficult to judge an item, even after researching ingredients, and sometimes it's helpful to hear "This reminded me of the [insert other product] in texture and [insert other other product] in scent". less

This is actually the first one that I've used. It's the original motion lotion so it's not technically a lotion...it's a lube...which I don't need. I was hoping to be able to use it as a massage lotion because it heats up, but it's so sticky that I can't imagine putting that EVERYWHERE. I'm probably going to skip the review on that one til I can get my hands on a different lotion, or skip it all together since it's not actually an assignment but just a product I decided to try. I really don't like it though...it's a lot harder to write a review for a product that you don't like. less

It's really difficult for me to have a nice balance because I know that some people prefer to have the info from the product page listed in the review as well, but others don't like it. Personally, I don't like it because it's just as easy to look at the page and I want to know stuff about the product that I can't get from the page, like experiences. Any suggestions on things to mention for reviews on lotions? I got myself some motion lotion and I plan on mentioning obvious things like how well it worked and how it tastes...it's a toughy though, because I let me roommate put some on her hand and taste it and she thinks it's gross, but I think it's good for an edible lotion. They usually don't taste amazing...they are lotions after all. less

I write my reviews (I try to anyway) as if the person reading the review has never read a sex toy or product review before, AND I include things in the review for the more experienced toy user to take from it, too.

While using a product for an alternative use is always good to include in your review, a review should always include how the product worked as its intended usage. Meaning, including "Motion Lotion" as a massage oil (which with all the glycerine, I can't imagine it not being a mess) would be fine, but you would also have to include the details of how it works as a sexual lubricant as that is its intended purpose.

For instance, I am in the market for a silicone lube, to use as a hair defrizzer. However, I don't use silicone lubes because of all the silicone toys I have, so although I might BUY a silicone lube to use for hair product, I wouldn't request one as an assignment, unless I'd be willing to test it at least 5 or 6 times (sans silicone toys) in order to write the review properly.

Also, reading as many reviews from high ranking and up an coming reviewers who usually get good votes will help you hone your writing skills, as will working with your mentor and if you need it, an other mentor after that.

Good luck.

ps. I personally do want much of the stuff included on the Product Page. I like to read the review in its entirety and I hate flipping back and forth, so I like to see a mention of size, circumference, ingredients, lube compatibility, storing and cleaning suggestions, etc. less

I will probably skip this one for review simply because I'm not going to use it as a lube. Honestly, I am really bummed because I can't really use it for anything. I'm afraid to use it as a lube because of the glycerine in it, and I am prone to yeast infections. Good thing I just purchased this instead of requesting it for a review. Of course it sucks that I spent money on it and probably won't be using it. Maybe I can have my roommate use it and make sure she pays attention to the details that you guys are looking for. less

Usually, I prefer reviews that give information that is NOT given on the product page. I hate it when I see multiple reviews on a product and they all say the same thing and spew all the information given on the product page. I like information regarding:
1) How you exactly used it
2) How well did it work for it's intended purpose? Did you find alternative uses?
3) How easily is it cleaned/charged/etc.
4) Did you like it? If so, why? If not, why? I hate it when people say "it didn't fit my anatomy" without giving an indication of what their anatomy is. That doesn't really help the person who is reading the review decide whether the item would work for them, as there is no real comparison given.
5) I really like follow ups that are atleast 2-3 months after the item was first reviewed, to see how it holds up/if the internal battery is wearing out/etc.

I find a lot of information given to be very vague. Things like "I really can't think of anything wrong" or "this toy is just all around great" don't mean much to me. less